Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
When I'm writing academic papers, I prefer typing because it's faster and much easier to edit, copy and translate. But I'm keeping When I'm keeping a diary, I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and help me reflect more deeply.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, recently I, uh, typing on my laptop nearly every day because I need to prepare my health examination, so I have to practice on the computer to, uh, improve my typing speed.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned a since I was in my primary school. Our school high says kind of classes and topped up to typing them walls on the computer. And yes, it was the time I start doing this.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Actually I don't translate my typing specifically because every day I just typing them words on my computer and the speed improve uh Nitro day. So maybe practice make perfect.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 回答需要更自然、流畅并减少重复。开头直接回应问题,然后用一两句具体原因或对比支持观点。注意时态和语法(e.g. 'help' → 'helps'),删除多余重复(如两次 'keeping')。可用连接词如 'however' 或 'but' 来衔接两种偏好。
Ejemplo: For academic work, I prefer typing because it's faster and makes editing and formatting much easier. However, I keep a handwritten diary since writing by hand feels more personal and helps me reflect more deeply.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 56.0Sugerencia: 回答需更简洁并修正语法和填充词。直接说出设备类型并给出简明理由,避免无意义的停顿('uh')。解释原因时具体一点(例如练习什么内容、如何准备体检)。使用连词如 'because' 或 'so' 使句子流畅。
Ejemplo: Yes, I use my laptop almost every day to type. I'm practicing on the computer to improve my typing speed and prepare for a timed health assessment.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 需要清晰的时间表达和完整句子。直接给出学习时间并描述学习方式或课程内容,避免断句和词序错误。使用具体词汇(e.g. 'primary school', 'computer class', 'basic typing lessons'),并用连接词组织信息。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school. My school offered basic computer classes where we practiced typing and learned keyboard layout and proper finger placement.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答要更明确地说明改进方法,而不是模糊地说每天练习。描述具体方法(如使用打字软件、练习指法、做打字测试)并纠正语法('practice makes perfect')。避免无意义词语('translate','Nitro day')。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing programs and timed tests. I also focus on proper finger placement and do short daily drills to gradually increase my speed and accuracy.
× When I'm writing academic papers, I prefer typing because it's faster and much easier to edit, copy and translate. But I'm keeping When I'm keeping a diary, I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and help me reflect more deeply.
✓ When I'm writing academic papers, I prefer typing because it's faster and much easier to edit, copy and translate. But when I'm keeping a diary, I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me reflect more deeply.
错误类型:动词 + -ing 形式/主谓一致混用。原句中 “I'm keeping” 在这里表示习惯动作应使用一般现在时或现在进行时的不当搭配;此外主语单数 (it) 后面动词应为第三人称单数形式 “helps”。建议在描述习惯或常态时用一般现在时(I keep / when I keep),或者保留现在进行时的一致使用;并将 “help” 改为 “helps”。修正后语法和语意更自然。
× Yes, recently I, uh, typing on my laptop nearly every day because I need to prepare my health examination, so I have to practice on the computer to, uh, improve my typing speed.
✓ Yes, recently I have been typing on my laptop nearly every day because I need to prepare for my health examination, so I have to practice on the computer to improve my typing speed.
错误类型:现在时态与时态构成问题。原句用 “I, uh, typing” 缺少助动词构成进行时,应为现在完成进行时以表示“最近一直在做”的动作:have been typing。另有介词短语错误,应该说 "prepare for my health examination"。建议使用现在完成进行时强调最近持续发生的动作,并修正介词用法。
× I learned a since I was in my primary school. Our school high says kind of classes and topped up to typing them walls on the computer. And yes, it was the time I start doing this.
✓ I learned to type since I was in primary school. Our school held some classes that taught typing on the computer. Yes, that was when I started doing it.
错误类型:过去时态及句子结构错误。原句中 “I learned a” 结构不完整,应为 “learned to type”。时间状语 “since I was in primary school” 常与现在完成时或过去完成时连用,但可接受过去时说明过去发生的学习。原句第二句词序混乱且单词使用错误,应改为 “Our school held some classes that taught typing on the computer.” 第三句要用过去时 “started”。建议重组句子,使用正确动词不定式 and 过去时形式。
× Actually I don't translate my typing specifically because every day I just typing them words on my computer and the speed improve uh Nitro day. So maybe practice make perfect.
✓ Actually I don't train my typing specifically because every day I just type words on my computer and the speed improves little by little. So maybe practice makes perfect.
错误类型:动词形式与主谓一致。原句 “don't translate” 用词错误,应为 “don't train”。“I just typing” 缺少助动词,应该用一般现在时 “I just type”。“the speed improve” 主语是单数名词 “speed”,动词应为第三人称单数形式 “improves”。短语 “Nitro day” 无意义,应改为合适的表达如 “little by little”。最后一句需用第三人称单数动词形式 “practice makes perfect”。建议检查动词形式和常用短语,注意主谓一致。