Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và có lý do kèm ví dụ, nhưng còn một số lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ không tự nhiên (ví dụ: "take note" → "take notes", "by my hands" → "by hand"). Bạn nên rút gọn để tránh lan man và dùng cấu trúc mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ, dùng từ chính xác và thêm một cụm liên kết để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because I often take notes at school and writing by hand helps me remember details better. For example, when I copy lecture points into my notebook, I find I retain the information longer.

Sugerencia: Ý chính rõ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp, cách dùng từ không chính xác và tiếng nói thân mật quá mức (ví dụ: "chat in with my friend", "'cause", "to and portable"). Nên tránh tiếng nói tắt không trang trọng, sửa trật từ và dùng liên từ phù hợp để câu trôi chảy hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes. Every night when I have free time I use my laptop to chat with my friends because it is convenient and portable.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có thông tin nhưng cấu trúc sai ngữ pháp và diễn đạt lủng củng (ví dụ: "in my school", "included basics it"). Nên nói rõ thời điểm và bối cảnh bằng câu ngắn gọn, sửa trật tự từ và dùng mệnh đề giải thích mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was eight at school. Typing basics were taught as part of the Vietnamese curriculum, so we had dedicated lessons.

Sugerencia: Nội dung tốt nhưng lặp từ và trật tự từ không tự nhiên (ví dụ: lặp "practice practice", đặt trạng từ "regularly" không đúng chỗ). Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn, tránh lặp và thêm liên từ để câu mượt mà hơn. Cụ thể nêu phương pháp thực hành và tần suất sẽ mạnh hơn.

Ejemplo: After school I go home and practice typing regularly, usually for about 20–30 minutes. I improve by typing things I enjoy, such as short stories or messages to my friends.

× I prefer handwriting to typing because I'm a student and at school I often take note on my notebooks.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I'm a student and at school I often take notes in my notebook.

The phrase 'take note' should be plural 'take notes' when referring to recording multiple pieces of information. Also 'on my notebooks' is incorrect preposition and number: use 'in my notebook' (singular) or 'in my notebooks' depending on meaning, but 'in my notebook' is clearer here.

× For example, writing by my hands helps me remember details better.

✓ For example, writing by hand helps me remember details better.

Use the fixed expression 'by hand' rather than 'by my hands'. 'By hand' is an idiomatic present participle usage to indicate the method of writing.

× Yes, every night when I have free time I always use my laptop keyboard to chat in with my friend 'cause it's very convenient to and portable.

✓ Yes. Every night when I have free time I always use my laptop to chat with my friend because it's very convenient and portable.

Remove redundant 'keyboard' after 'laptop' and change 'chat in with' to 'chat with'. Replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because'. Also 'convenient to and portable' is incorrect order and grammar; use 'convenient and portable'. This fixes sentence structure and word usage.

× I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 8 in my school because in Vietnamese education curriculum included basics it.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was eight at school because the Vietnamese education curriculum included the basics.

Use 'eight' (spelled) or '8' consistently; 'at school' is more natural than 'in my school' here. The clause 'because in Vietnamese education curriculum included basics it' is ungrammatical: correct to 'because the Vietnamese education curriculum included the basics.' This fixes past tense and word order.

× After school I come home and practice practice typing regularly.

✓ After school I come home and practice typing regularly.

Remove the duplicated word 'practice'. The present simple 'come' and 'practice' are appropriate for habitual actions, so keep tense but correct repetition.

× Regularly I always type something I enjoy, like short stories or chatting with my friend.

✓ I always type things I enjoy regularly, like short stories or chat with my friends.

'Something I enjoy' can be pluralized to 'things I enjoy' to match examples. 'Chatting with my friend' should be 'chat with my friends' (plural) or 'chatting with my friend' rephrased to parallel 'short stories'. Also adverb placement: 'always' and 'regularly' are redundant; choose one or place them properly. Revised sentence aligns adverbs and parallel structures.