Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a clearer example. Correct grammar (use present perfect/simple when appropriate) and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like “because” and “for example” properly.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I find it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand, I recall more details later than when I type them, probably because writing slows me down and reinforces memory.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, grammatical answer first, then one or two concise reasons. Avoid repetitions and informal fillers. Use clear linking words such as “because” or “so” and correct verb tenses.

Ejemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I own a laptop and use it for both personal work and studying. I find laptop keyboards more convenient and portable than desktop keyboards.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear time frame using correct tense and simplify the explanation. Give one coherent reason or activity that helped you learn. Remove unclear phrases and filler words.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was about six to eight years old. I practised on my parents’ laptop by playing computer games and doing simple tasks, which helped me improve my typing skills early on.

Sugerencia: Answer directly in present simple for routines. Describe specific practice methods and be precise about frequency and progress. Remove hesitations and correct comparative phrasing.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising every day. For example, I write short essays, type emails and fill out forms regularly, which has reduced my mistakes and increased my speed over time.

× I prefer handwriting because I have used it since my childhood and it is more memorable for me.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I have used it since my childhood and it is more memorable to me.

The phrase 'memorable for me' is not the usual collocation; native speakers say 'memorable to me'. This is a preposition/phrase choice affecting meaning and naturalness. Suggestion: use 'memorable to me' or 'easier to remember'.

× For example, if I return notes by my hand, it takes my into mind more details than typing.

✓ For example, if I write notes by hand, they stick in my mind more than typing.

Multiple issues: 'return notes by my hand' is incorrect verb and article usage; 'by hand' is the correct phrase. 'it takes my into mind more details' is ungrammatical—use 'they stick in my mind' or 'I remember more details'. Also use plural pronoun 'they' for 'notes'. Suggestion: simplify to 'I write notes by hand; I remember more details than when I type.'

× I used to type on laptop keyboard rather than desktop caused I do have on laptop for my personals works and for my study I prefer I personally I felt laptop keyboard is more conventional and easy for use than desktop.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard rather than a desktop because I have a laptop for my personal work and study. Personally, I find the laptop keyboard more convenient and easier to use than a desktop keyboard.

Errors include incorrect tense and phrasing: 'used to' implies past habit; context asks present habit so use 'usually' or 'I type'. Missing articles before 'laptop keyboard' and 'desktop'. 'caused' is incorrect connector—use 'because'. 'personals works' should be 'personal work'. 'I prefer I personally I felt' mixes tenses and repetitions; use present simple 'I find'. 'conventional' is wrong word choice; 'convenient' is intended. Also 'easy for use' should be 'easier to use'.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? / I learned to type on keyboard since my very young age, maybe since the six to eight years I used to my parents laptop and a young use for my for the something return or I used to play video games on there.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was very young. Maybe between six and eight years old, using my parents' laptop to do simple tasks or play video games.

Original mixes past tense markers incorrectly: 'learned ... since my very young age' is unnatural with 'since'—use 'when I was very young' or 'since I was'. 'since the six to eight years' should be 'between six and eight years old'. 'my parents laptop' needs possessive apostrophe 'parents\''. Remove extraneous words like 'a young use for my for the something return'. Use coherent clauses and past reference 'using' to describe activities. Suggestion: 'I learned when I was very young, maybe between six and eight, using my parents' laptop for simple tasks and games.'

× I had improved my typing by practicing a lot in daily basis.

✓ I have improved my typing by practicing a lot on a daily basis.

Use present perfect 'have improved' to relate past improvement to the present. 'had improved' (past perfect) is incorrect without a past reference. Also 'in daily basis' is wrong preposition and article; correct is 'on a daily basis'.

× Like I used to write uh, essay umm, doing my personal informations and emails in daily basis.

✓ For example, I used to write essays, fill out personal information, and write emails on a daily basis.

Problems: 'write uh, essay' should be plural 'essays' or 'an essay' depending on meaning. 'doing my personal informations' is wrong—'fill out personal information' is correct and 'information' is uncountable. 'in daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. Use parallel verb forms: 'write...fill out...write'.

× Uh, I'm not it perfect, but I can write fewer mistakes than in the before.

✓ I'm not perfect, but I make fewer mistakes than before.

'I'm not it perfect' contains extraneous 'it'; remove it. Use 'make fewer mistakes' (not 'write fewer mistakes') and compare to 'before' (no 'in the'). Also 'fewer' is correct with countable 'mistakes'. Suggestion: 'I'm not perfect, but I make fewer mistakes than I used to.'