Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition (e.g., 'I loved' twice), correct grammar (e.g., 'I've been to London' → 'I went to London'; 'the rural one' → 'rural scenes'). Add one specific supporting detail and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially when I'm on holiday. For example, when I went to London last year I photographed both urban scenes like the riverside skyline and nearby rural countryside. I found the contrast between modern architecture and quiet green spaces really striking.

Sugerencia: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence, correct prepositions and phrasing ('fascinated by' not 'into'), and finish the thought. Avoid trailing off. Use one linking phrase to add a contrasting point. Provide one specific example and a brief reason why you prefer urban views.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I find cityscapes more inspiring. For instance, I was impressed by the bright lights around Canary Wharf and Westminster in London, which create a dramatic atmosphere. However, I also appreciate rural views for their peacefulness.

Sugerencia: Remove filler words ('umm') and start with a clear direct answer. Use linking words ('because', 'for example') and give one concrete example of a view at home and one abroad. Keep sentences short and specific to improve clarity and fluency.

Ejemplo: I don't mind whether views are in my own country or abroad because it depends on the scene rather than the location. For example, Italy offers many breathtaking coastal vistas near Cinque Terre, while abroad I loved the dramatic mountain views in the Swiss Alps.

× For instance, recently I've been to London and I've loved to take a picture of the different scenes, especially the urban and the rural one.

✓ For instance, recently I went to London and I loved taking pictures of the different scenes, especially the urban and the rural ones.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'I've been' with time adverb 'recently' which can be acceptable, but 'I've been to London and I've loved to take a picture' is awkward because 'loved' should be followed by a gerund for activities ('loved taking') and 'a picture' should be plural to match 'different scenes'. Use simple past 'I went' for a definite past event 'recently'. Also change 'the rural one' to 'the rural ones' for plural agreement. Suggestion: Use 'I went to London' for a completed trip, use 'loved taking pictures' for the activity and make nouns agree in number.

× I do prefer views in urban areas because I find them more inspiring and I'm particularly fascinated into the metropolitan landscape such as the blinding lights in London in areas like Canary Wharf or the Westminster part, but at the same time also like.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I find them more inspiring, and I'm particularly fascinated by the metropolitan landscape, such as the blinding lights in London in areas like Canary Wharf or Westminster, although I also like rural views.

Use 'fascinated by' not 'fascinated into'; 'prefer' is sufficient without 'do' here. 'The Westminster part' is awkward; 'Westminster' or 'the Westminster area' is better. Sentence was incomplete at the end ('but at the same time also like'); complete thought by adding what is also liked. Suggestion: Replace incorrect preposition 'into' with 'by', remove unnecessary 'do', and finish the comparison clearly.

× It was really enjoyable to me and I loved it.

✓ It was really enjoyable, and I loved it.

Grammatically the phrase 'enjoyable to me' is not wrong but unnatural in this context; native speakers typically say 'it was really enjoyable' or 'I really enjoyed it'. Also two short clauses should be connected with a comma and conjunction. Suggestion: Use 'I really enjoyed it' for a more natural phrasing.

× I prefer views anywhere in the world because umm, it does not mainly depend on the country, but on the type of umm scenario that takes place in front of your eyes.

✓ I prefer views anywhere in the world because it doesn't mainly depend on the country, but on the type of scene that appears in front of your eyes.

Use the contraction 'doesn't' for natural spoken English; 'umm' fillers should be omitted in written corrections. 'Scenario' is odd here; 'scene' or 'view' fits better. 'That takes place' is acceptable but 'that appears' is cleaner. Suggestion: Use natural contractions and choose the noun 'scene' instead of 'scenario'.

× And umm, in Italy I have many breathtaking views, but also all over the world.

✓ And in Italy I have many breathtaking views, but I also find them all over the world.

Remove filler 'umm'. The original sentence lacks a clear verb for the second clause 'but also all over the world.' Add 'I also find them' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: Ensure each clause has a clear subject and verb and avoid fillers in formal statements.