Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Исправьте грамматику и произношение, сократите многословие и используйте связные фразы. Начните с ясного топик‑предложения, затем кратко добавьте подробности. Например, избегайте лишних заполнителей (uh) и правильно согласуйте артикли и формы глаголов (например, "I enjoy taking photos", не "to taking a pictures"). Также уточните инструмент и цель, используя связки: "because", "so", "which".

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because I like experimenting with various effects. I often use an app on my phone that offers many filters, so I can change lighting and colors to create different moods.

Sugerencia: Устраните ошибки в построении предложений и используйте связки для логичности. Дайте чёткое мнение в начале, затем объясните причину конкретно и без повторов. Исправьте словосочетания (например, "open landscapes", "feel cozy, relaxing and refreshing") и фразы типа "after a busy week in center" — лучше: "after a busy week in the city".

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the open landscapes feel cozy, relaxing and refreshing. After a busy week in the city, spending time in nature helps me unwind and recharge.

Sugerencia: Скажите ясно своё предпочтение и объясните причину логично и кратко. Избегайте повторов (не повторяйте "all of these views" несколько раз) и используйте формальное, нейтральное выражение вместо разговорных сокращений (например, "wanna" → "want to"). Уточните, что именно привлекает в других странах — новизна, культура или пейзажи.

Ejemplo: I generally prefer views in other countries because new landscapes and cultures feel more exciting and unfamiliar. Seeing different scenery helps me broaden my perspective and learn about other places.

× Yes, I enjoy to taking a pictures of different views, uh, with a difference effects. Uh, I have a this application in my phone does come and in this application have many, many, uh, effects, and I can take a photo.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, with different effects. I have an app on my phone that has many effects, and I can take photos.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund, not 'to' plus gerund. Use 'taking' instead of 'to taking'. 'A pictures' is incorrect because 'pictures' is plural, so use no article: 'taking pictures'. 'Difference effects' should be 'different effects' (adjective form). 'I have a this application' has incorrect articles: use 'an app' or 'an application'. 'On my phone' is the correct preposition. 'does come' is ungrammatical; use a relative clause: 'that has' or 'which has'. Also use 'has many effects' (third person singular). 'I can take a photo' is fine but better as 'I can take photos' to match general habit. Suggestion: Practice gerund after enjoy and check article use with countable nouns and form relative clauses for describing functions (that has).

× I prefer a views in rural areas because the open landscapes and evoking rural areas so cozy like relaxing and refreshing which helps me invite after a busy week in center.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the open landscapes there are so cozy, relaxing, and refreshing, which helps me unwind after a busy week in the city.

Use no article before the plural noun 'views' ('a views' is wrong). 'Evoking rural areas' is incorrect word choice and structure; use 'there are' to describe landscapes. 'So cozy like relaxing and refreshing' is ungrammatical—use a list of adjectives: 'cozy, relaxing, and refreshing'. 'Helps me invite' is wrong verb; use 'help me unwind' or 'help me relax'. 'In center' needs an article and clearer noun: 'in the city' or 'in the center of town'. Suggestion: Remove incorrect articles before plurals, use 'there are' for existence/descriptions, choose correct verbs for intended meaning, and use 'in the city' for location.

× I generally prefer this in other countries because in my own country I see all of these views and all of these views feel familiar and emotionally meaningful for me. But I wanna see the other views in other countries.

✓ I generally prefer views in other countries because in my own country I see these views and they feel familiar and emotionally meaningful to me. But I want to see other views in other countries.

'Prefer this in other countries' is vague; use 'prefer views in other countries'. Present simple 'see' is acceptable for habitual action, but 'all of these views' is repetitive; simplify to 'these views'. Use 'they feel' to refer back to 'views' (correct pronoun). 'Emotionally meaningful for me' is understandable but 'to me' is more natural. 'Wanna' is colloquial spoken form; in written correction use 'want to'. Also 'the other views in other countries' repeats 'other'; use 'other views in other countries'. Suggestion: Use natural present simple for habits, replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to', and maintain consistent reference pronouns.