Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh, umm) and correct verb forms (use present simple for habits).

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I especially enjoy photographing beautiful landscapes when I visit new places because I want to capture unique scenes and keep memories of them. For example, I recently photographed a coastal cliff at sunset, which helped me remember the colours and mood of that place.

Sugerencia: Make the response grammatically correct and more concise. Begin with a direct preference, then give two specific reasons connected with linking words. Fix vocabulary and article use (close -> be close to; 'the city's rest of my life' is unclear).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones. Firstly, I enjoy being close to nature since it feels peaceful and fresh; secondly, rural landscapes seem more visually appealing to me because they have open fields and natural colours. Because I grew up in a city, I especially appreciate the contrast when I visit the countryside.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing. State your preference directly, give a reason, and support it with a brief example. Use natural expressions (e.g. 'I prefer the landscapes of my own country because...').

Ejemplo: If I have to choose, I prefer the landscapes of my own country. I love them because they are familiar and diverse, ranging from mountains to coastlines, and they remind me of home. For example, I always enjoy visiting the highlands where the scenery and traditional villages feel unique and comforting.

× I liked, uh, taking photos of beautiful landscapes, especially, umm, the place that I've never been to before because I want to save their valuable memories.

✓ I like taking photos of beautiful landscapes, especially places that I have never been to before because I want to save their valuable memories.

The student used past tense 'liked' which conflicts with the ongoing habit expressed by the question; use present simple 'like' for habits. Also 'the place that I've never been to before' is awkward and mismatches singular/plural with 'landscapes' and 'their'; change to 'places that I have never been to before' and keep present perfect 'have never been to' to indicate experience up to now. Use 'want to save their valuable memories' is acceptable though 'their' refers to places (personification) but is not flagged here. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions (I like), use present perfect to describe life experience (I have never been to), and match singular/plural between nouns and pronouns.

× I like rural areas more because I want to close to the nature and I think is is more beautiful than the city views as I live in the city's rest of my life.

✓ I like rural areas more because I want to be close to nature, and I think they are more beautiful than city views since I have lived in the city for most of my life.

Multiple issues: missing verb 'be' after 'want to' and wrong preposition 'close to the nature' should be 'be close to nature' (no article with 'nature'). 'is is more beautiful' has a subject-verb omission and typo; replace with 'they are more beautiful' (plural subject 'rural areas' or 'they'). 'as I live in the city's rest of my life' is incorrect: use 'since I have lived in the city for most of my life' to indicate duration up to now (present perfect) and correct noun phrase 'most of my life' rather than 'the city's rest of my life.' Suggestion: Include 'be' after 'want to', avoid using 'the' with 'nature', ensure subject and verb agree, and use correct temporal expressions for lifetime duration.

× If I have to choose, I would like to say that I'm I fall in love with my my landscape of my own country because my country is considered as the most beautiful country in the world.

✓ If I had to choose, I would say that I have fallen in love with the landscapes of my own country because my country is considered one of the most beautiful in the world.

Problems: 'If I have to choose' should be the conditional 'If I had to choose' when paired with 'I would'. 'I would like to say that I'm I fall in love' contains redundancy and tense errors; use 'I would say that I have fallen in love' to express an ongoing state resulting from past experience. Repetition 'my my' should be removed. 'Landscape of my own country' is better as plural 'the landscapes of my own country.' 'considered as the most beautiful country' is unnatural in English; use 'considered one of the most beautiful in the world.' Suggestion: Use correct conditional form (If I had... I would...), remove redundant words, match tense for present result of past action (present perfect), pluralize when appropriate, and use idiomatic expressions like 'one of the most beautiful.'