Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words like 'actually' and 'umm'.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take pictures of views. I prefer to remember scenes with my own eyes because looking directly at a place feels more personal and memorable. For example, when I travel I focus on soaking up the atmosphere instead of photographing every sight.

Sugerencia: Work on coherence and vocabulary precision. Begin with a direct answer, then use linking words (because, however) to give two specific reasons. Reduce hesitations and correct comparative forms ('clearer' not 'more clearer').

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they tend to be more peaceful and scenic. For example, countryside landscapes usually have open fields and fewer tall buildings, and the air often feels cleaner, which makes the scenery more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Be more specific and concise: state preference, then give concrete comparisons or examples. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'whereas' and avoid vague phrases like 'very similar'.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different architectural styles and cultural scenes. For example, cityscapes in Europe often feature historic buildings and narrow streets, whereas many Chinese cities have modern high-rises and wide avenues, so travelling abroad gives me fresher visual experiences.

× No, actually I don't like take pictures of different views.

✓ No, actually I don't like taking pictures of different views.

When a verb follows 'like' to express preference, use the gerund (verb+ing). 'Don't like take' is incorrect; 'don't like taking' is correct. Suggestion: use 'like' + verb-ing for general preferences (I like swimming, I don't like eating spicy food).

× Actually I just don't like using the cameras or using my photos to take pictures because I think remember things with my eyes are more interesting and unforgettable, so I don't like to take pictures.

✓ Actually I just don't like using cameras or taking photos because I think remembering things with my eyes is more interesting and more unforgettable, so I don't like to take pictures.

Multiple issues: after 'like' use gerund: 'using cameras' (not 'using the cameras' unless specific cameras). 'Using my photos to take pictures' is illogical; use 'taking photos'. 'Remember things with my eyes' needs a gerund as subject 'remembering'. Also 'more unforgettable' is awkward but kept; better 'more memorable'. Suggestion: simplify: 'I don't like taking photos because I prefer to remember things with my own eyes; they feel more memorable.'

× MMM For me, I prefer things in rural areas because I think in modern, in modern areas there are a lot of umm, high buildings and uh, it is often umm, uh, very uh, traffic heavy.

✓ For me, I prefer rural areas because I think modern urban areas have many tall buildings and are often very congested with traffic.

Problems: repetition 'in modern, in modern' and wrong phrase 'traffic heavy'. Use 'modern urban areas' or 'modern cities'; 'have many tall buildings' (plural noun) and 'are congested with traffic' or 'have heavy traffic'. Suggestion: avoid filler words and use 'are often congested' or 'have heavy traffic'.

× But in rural areas the things are more beautiful and the weather is more clearer.

✓ But in rural areas things are more beautiful and the weather is clearer.

'More clearer' is incorrect because 'clearer' already is comparative; do not use 'more' with comparative formed by '-er'. Also 'the things' is unnatural; use 'things' or 'the scenery'. Suggestion: say 'rural scenery is more beautiful' or 'the weather is clearer'.

× I prefer views in other countries because in my country that is China, especially in some famous cities such as Xi'an, Changsha, Chengdu, there are views which are very umm, very similar.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because in my country, China, especially in some famous cities such as Xi'an, Changsha and Chengdu, the views are very similar.

Minor article/word order issues: 'in my country that is China' is awkward; use apposition 'my country, China'. 'There are views which are very similar' is wordy; simpler 'the views are very similar'. Suggestion: use commas for apposition and concise phrasing.

× So the things you can see in Chengdu, especially in the cities, you can also see in Xi'an.

✓ So the things you can see in Chengdu's cities you can also see in Xi'an.

Original repeats clause awkwardly. Better combine: 'the things you can see in Chengdu's cities you can also see in Xi'an' or 'what you can see in Chengdu's cities you can also see in Xi'an'. Suggestion: avoid repeating 'you can' and restructure the sentence for clarity.

× But I think it will be different in other countries.

✓ But I think they are different in other countries.

Tense and reference: 'it will be different' is vague; refer to 'views' (plural), so use plural 'they are different' to match subject. Use simple present for general opinion: 'I think they are different in other countries.' Suggestion: ensure pronoun agrees with the noun it replaces and use appropriate tense for general statements.