Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, I like take pictures to different views especially landscape. I will choose a same place and finding different view and taking some shots.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
I prefer rural areas like seaside or Mountain High. I like and I will wait until sunset or sunrise and shut the perfect moment.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
I prefer other countries because they have different views I never seen. So I will prepare a travel and go there to find something beautiful place and take pictures in there and sharing.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 用更自然、语法正确的句子直接回答问题,并在一两句内给出具体细节。注意时态和动词形式(like to take, choose, find, take shots),避免重复表达。可增加一个简短例子说明你如何寻找不同的景色。
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially landscapes. I often return to the same spot at different times of day to capture changes in light and atmosphere, for example shooting the shoreline at dawn and at sunset to compare colours.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 回答要更自然并修正词汇与语法(e.g. prefer rural areas such as the seaside or mountains; wait until sunrise/sunset and shoot the perfect moment)。用连接词把观点和原因连起来,提供具体例子说明你等待拍摄的情况。
Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas such as the seaside or the mountains because the natural light and open space create more dramatic images. For instance, I often hike to a viewpoint early in the morning and wait until sunrise to photograph the fog lifting over the valley.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 用更准确的表达说明偏好并给出理由(e.g. I prefer other countries because they offer unfamiliar scenery)。避免语法和搭配错误(prepare a trip/travel, find beautiful places, take pictures and share them)。可以补充一两个具体目的地或期待拍摄的内容。
Ejemplo: I prefer visiting other countries because they offer unfamiliar landscapes and cultures that inspire my photography. For example, I plan trips to coastal towns in Portugal to capture colourful houses and dramatic cliffs that I can't find at home.
× Yes, I like take pictures to different views especially landscape.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially landscapes.
句子中 like 后需接动名词 taking,而不是不定式 take;介词搭配应为 take pictures of(拍……的照片),而不是 to different views;landscape 应使用复数或加限定词。建议记住动词 like 后常用动名词结构,常见搭配是 take pictures of sth。
× I will choose a same place and finding different view and taking some shots.
✓ I choose the same place and find different views and take some shots.
原句混合了将来时和现在分词,且 a same 不正确(same 不与不定冠词连用),finding/taking 用法不恰当。根据语境(习惯动作或计划),可用一般现在时或将来时。若表习惯用一般现在 I choose/find/take;若表将来计划可改为 I will choose the same place, find different views and take some shots。建议统一时态,注意 same 不与 a 连用,并把动词保持原形或适当的时态。
× I prefer rural areas like seaside or Mountain High.
✓ I prefer rural areas like the seaside or high mountains.
seaside 前通常加定冠词 the;Mountain High 词序不当且大小写错误,应为 high mountains(高山)。建议注意名词前冠词与形容词位置,地理名词常用 the seaside 或 mountains。
× I like and I will wait until sunset or sunrise and shut the perfect moment.
✓ I like to wait until sunset or sunrise and shoot the perfect moment.
句中 shut 用错,应为 shoot(拍摄);结构上 I like and I will wait 不够自然,常用 like to do 或 I like doing;将来时可用 I will wait,但搭配 shoot 时用动词不定式或原形。建议区分相近词汇(shut vs shoot),并使用正确动词形式。
× I prefer other countries because they have different views I never seen.
✓ I prefer other countries because they have different views I have never seen.
“never seen”需与现在完成时连用(have never seen),表示到现在为止没有见过。建议在表示过去到现在的经历时使用现在完成时。
× So I will prepare a travel and go there to find something beautiful place and take pictures in there and sharing.
✓ So I will prepare a trip and go there to find some beautiful places, take pictures there and share them.
travel 用法错误,应为 a trip 或 travel (不可数);something beautiful place 词序与搭配错误,应为 some beautiful places 或 a beautiful place;take pictures in there 冗余,常用 take pictures there;sharing 需用动词短语 share them。建议注意可数/不可数名词、词序以及代词指代要一致并使用正确动词形式。