Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar, use a clear topic sentence and provide specific reasons with linking words. Limit to 3–4 well-formed sentences. Replace fillers (uh, like) and correct verb forms and articles (a/ the).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I take photos to preserve memories and because I find nature calming, especially when I feel tired and want a relaxing activity. Sometimes I browse my gallery later for inspiration or to share my best shots with friends.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement, then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and improve grammar (comparative structures and articles). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas to urban ones. Rural places have less noise and air pollution, and the abundant greenery and peaceful atmosphere often feel refreshing and restorative.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and two concise, specific reasons. Remove repetitions and filler words; correct vocabulary (attachment -> an attachment; views -> view). If you lack experience of other countries, say so briefly and link it to your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country. I feel a strong attachment to its landscapes and cultural scenery, and since I haven't traveled much abroad, I am more familiar with and fond of the places at home.

× I like to take picture of the different views because it for my memory and uh, I like nature, the views and I sometimes then I'm bored and I have nothing to do.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views because it is for my memory. I like nature and the views, and sometimes when I'm bored and have nothing to do, I look at them.

The sentence has multiple issues but per instructions only corrections matching the listed grammar types are applied. 'take picture' requires plural 'pictures' (singular/plural issue but corrected here as part of verb + -ing context of 'taking'); 'then I'm bored' and 'I have nothing to do' need reordering and connectors. 'it for my memory' needs a verb 'is'. Also use 'look at them' to refer to the pictures. Suggestion: use 'take pictures' for habitual action, include 'is' for 'it is for my memory', and use conjunctions ('when') to connect clauses.

× I like to take picture of the different views because it for my memory and uh, I like nature, the views and I sometimes then I'm bored and I have nothing to do.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views because they are for my memory. I like nature and the views, and sometimes when I'm bored and have nothing to do, I look at them.

The phrase 'take picture' should be 'take pictures' (plural) when referring generally to taking photographs. 'the different views' -> 'different views' is more natural. Pronoun agreement: 'it' should be 'they' to match 'pictures'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and matching pronouns for general habits.

× like there's a natural beauty and instead of noise pollution and other pollution that we are very clear and safe views and area and greenery that's mesmerized me sometimes like how it is.

✓ There is natural beauty and less noise and other pollution, so the views and the area are very clear and safe, and the greenery sometimes mesmerizes me.

This sentence misuses 'there's' and has unclear comparisons. 'There's a natural beauty' is acceptable, but the contrasting idea should use 'less' not 'instead of'. 'we are very clear' is incorrect; the subject should be 'the views and the area are very clear.' 'that's mesmerized me' should be 'mesmerizes me' for present habit. Suggestion: Use 'there is' for existence, 'less' for reduced pollution, and align subject-verb agreement.

× and greenery that's mesmerized me sometimes like how it is.

✓ and the greenery sometimes mesmerizes me.

The original uses 'that's mesmerized me' which mixes a relative contraction 'that's' (that is/that has) with past participle 'mesmerized' incorrectly. For a habitual present reaction use third person singular present 'mesmerizes'. Suggestion: Use 'mesmerizes' when describing a regular reaction to a singular noun 'greenery'.

× I prefer views in my own country because, uh, I just have a attachment to my country as it is my motherland and also, uh, I love this views and I do not like the other countries and don't have many idea like, uh, I didn't go any other country instead of my country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I have an attachment to my country as it is my motherland. Also, I love these views, and I don't know much about other countries because I haven't been to any country other than my own.

Preposition and article errors: 'a attachment' should be 'an attachment'; 'love this views' should be 'these views'; 'didn't go any other country' should be 'haven't been to any country other than my own.' Use 'to' with 'been' and 'other than' for exclusion. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('to' with 'been'), determiners ('an', 'these'), and 'other than' to compare.

× I didn't go any other country instead of my country.

✓ I haven't been to any country other than my own.

The original uses simple past 'didn't go' which is awkward for life experience; present perfect 'have not been' is appropriate. Also 'instead of' is incorrect; use 'other than' or 'besides'. Suggestion: Use present perfect to talk about experiences up to now and 'other than' for exceptions.

× I like nature, the views and I sometimes then I'm bored and I have nothing to do. Like I am totally tired and didn't wanna do some physical work. Then I will explore my gallery and see the next reviews and that.

✓ I like nature and the views. Sometimes when I'm bored and tired and don't want to do any physical work, I look through my gallery and see the photos.

Pronoun and reference issues: 'the next reviews and that' is unclear; replace with 'the photos' to refer back to pictures. 'didn't wanna' is informal and mismatches tense; use 'don't want' for present habit. Suggestion: Use clear pronouns and nouns for reference and consistent tense/modal forms.