Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct vocabulary (views/environments), and limit to 3–4 concise sentences. Use linking words (because/so) correctly and add one specific detail or example to support your reason. Focus on present simple and correct word forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I find that photos capture memories and make me feel happy when I look at them because they remind me of special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets near my home to remember peaceful evenings.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer first (prefer rural/urban/both) and then explain with specific reasons and one example. Use linking words (however, because, also) and correct grammar (e.g., "both are good", "there are"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I grew up in a village and I enjoy the calm atmosphere and natural scenery. However, urban areas are interesting too because they offer more cultural activities and photo opportunities in the evenings.

Sugerencia: Answer directly (I prefer my country) and give clear reasons with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Add one specific example or comparison and use linking words (because, although). Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they are peaceful and the people are very friendly. Although other countries have interesting landscapes, I feel more relaxed and safe at home, for example when I visit the quiet countryside near my town.

× Yes, of course, I really like taking a picture different wives and environment, because when I say in the when I see this picture, I really happy and gives me memorable energy.

✓ Yes, of course. I really like taking pictures of different views and environments, because when I see these pictures I feel really happy and they give me memorable energy.

Multiple issues: singular/plural (1) — 'a picture' should be 'pictures' and 'different wives' is incorrect; correct word is 'views'. Countable noun 'environment' should be plural 'environments' to match 'different views' or could remain singular depending on meaning. Subject-verb agreement / verb form (27 & 13) — 'I really happy' needs a verb 'feel' to be grammatically complete. Pronoun/agreement and verb number (27) — 'gives' should be 'give' to agree with plural subject 'they' (the pictures). Also incorrect word choice (13) for 'wives' -> 'views'. Suggested improvement: identify head nouns and ensure correct singular/plural forms, include appropriate verbs like 'feel', and make pronouns agree with their antecedents.

× So the when I take a picture the environment very beautiful.

✓ So when I take a picture, the environment is very beautiful.

Singular/plural issue (1) combined with sentence structure: missing verb 'is' to describe 'the environment'. Also extraneous 'the' before 'when'; remove 'the' for correct temporal clause. Suggestion: include the appropriate form of 'be' (is) after the subject and avoid extra articles in time clauses.

× In my opinion, both of them very good choice to live and they took a picture, uh, because there has many opportunities.

✓ In my opinion, both of them are very good choices to live in, and people take pictures there because there are many opportunities.

Subject-verb agreement and structure errors (27 & 26): missing verb 'are' after subject 'both of them'; 'choice' should be plural 'choices' to match plural subject. 'They took a picture' is past tense and unclear; correct present 'people take pictures there'. 'There has many opportunities' uses wrong verb and structure; correct is 'there are many opportunities'. Suggestion: ensure verbs match subjects in number and tense and use 'there are' for existence of plural nouns.

× But uh, I really like rural area because I live in a, a village.

✓ But I really like the rural area because I live in a village.

Article errors (22): English requires an article before 'rural area'; use 'the rural area' if speaking generally about rural settings, or 'rural areas' for plural. Also 'a, a village' reduces to 'a village'. Suggestion: choose correct article ('a', 'the') and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× It's their atmosphere is very beautiful, but also urban area area.

✓ Its atmosphere is very beautiful, but urban areas are also nice.

Incorrect use of pronouns and articles (11 & 12): 'It's their atmosphere' is wrong; use possessive 'Its atmosphere' referring to the village. Repetition 'area area' is an error; use plural 'urban areas' and include verb 'are' to form a complete clause. Suggestion: use correct possessive pronouns and check for accidental word duplication; match singular/plural consistently.

× Well, my country prefer than others because the the place is very peaceful and people and very peoples and very friendly.

✓ Well, I prefer my country to others because the place is very peaceful and the people are very friendly.

Present tense and comparative structure issues (6 & 19): 'my country prefer than others' is wrong: the speaker prefers their country, so subject should be 'I prefer my country to others' (comparison uses 'prefer ... to ...'). Article error 'the the place' and incorrect plural 'peoples' and missing verb for 'people are very friendly'. Suggestion: use correct comparative structure 'prefer A to B', avoid duplicate articles, and ensure verbs like 'are' link subject and adjective.

× So the another country is also good, but there it can be not peaceful.

✓ Other countries are also good, but they may not be peaceful there.

Tense and modal verb usage and word order issues (6 & 4): 'the another country' should be 'other countries' or 'another country' without 'the'; word order 'there it can be not peaceful' is awkward and incorrect — better: 'they may not be peaceful there' or 'it may not be peaceful there'. Suggestion: choose correct determiner for countability, use modal 'may' for possibility, and place adverbials (there) at the end of the sentence for natural English word order.