Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ, nói rõ ý chính và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và phát âm không rõ. Cấu trúc câu nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes, I like taking pictures of different views) rồi giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và nêu ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ độ dài tối đa 3-4 câu, dùng liên từ đơn giản như 'because' hoặc 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy capturing beautiful landscapes. For example, I often photograph sunsets over the river near my home. I also share these photos with friends to show them the scenery.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện từ vựng chính xác (urban, rural) và ngữ pháp so sánh. Nêu rõ sở thích (urban hoặc rural) với một lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'because of' để kết nối lý do. Tránh lỗi phát âm khi nói 'urban' và ‘community’.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because they are more convenient and lively. For instance, city views often include interesting architecture and busy streets, which I find exciting. I also like being close to cafes and galleries.

Sugerencia: Sắp xếp ý rõ ràng: trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể về địa điểm. Sửa lỗi từ và cách diễn đạt (e.g., 'my country', 'tourist attractions', 'Halong Bay'). Tránh dùng từ không đúng như 'any picture square' và nói rõ tại sao bạn thích cảnh ở Việt Nam (ví dụ: cảnh biển, danh lam thắng cảnh).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has many beautiful landscapes. For example, Halong Bay with its limestone islands and the long sandy beaches are very scenic. I feel proud to show these places to visitors.

× Yes, I very I really interesting in talk talking picture picture of different view because I I have each because I I love picturesque, so I want to share and have smoke in experience some some people.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because I love picturesque scenes, and I want to share my experience with other people.

The original sentence has multiple repetition and word order issues and lacks proper verbs and connectors. Use the verb 'like' with the -ing form 'taking pictures' (gerund) to express preference. 'Different views' should be plural (Singular and plural issue). 'I love picturesque scenes' is the correct adjective+noun order. 'Share my experience with other people' is a clear, grammatical way to express the idea. Suggestions: remove repeated words, use 'really like' rather than 'very I really', use plural 'views', and use 'share my experience with other people'.

× In my view, I prefer view of in Uber Uber area because it's it very easy. It every easy to live and come and it's have many people with who we can community.

✓ In my view, I prefer views in urban areas because it is very easy to live and commute, and there are many people with whom we can build a community.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: use 'views in urban areas' not 'view of in Uber Uber area'. 'Urban' is the correct adjective; 'areas' should be plural. Use 'it is very easy to live and commute' (verb and noun choice). Use 'there are' for existence (There be issue). Use 'with whom we can build a community' for correct preposition and relative pronoun. Suggestions: use 'in' for locations, 'commute' instead of 'come', and 'there are' when mentioning existence.

× Now I prefer view on in my country because my country in Vietnam and Vietnam have any picture square and the attractive visitor tour is like hello by Halomba and some beach. So I prefer my my view, my country view.

✓ Now I prefer views in my country because my country is Vietnam, which has many picturesque squares and attractive tourist spots such as Halong Bay and some beaches. So I prefer the views of my country.

Errors include incorrect prepositions 'view on in', missing verb 'is' for 'my country is Vietnam' (Present tense issue), incorrect quantifier 'any', and wrong vocabulary 'visitor tour' and 'hello by Halomba' likely meant 'Halong Bay'. Use 'has many' for possession and plural 'views'. Use 'tourist spots' or 'attractions' for clarity. Suggestions: use 'in' for countries, include the verb 'is', use 'has many picturesque squares', and correct proper nouns (Halong Bay).