Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and correct tense/structure errors. Use linking words only if adding a brief reason or example. For instance, say you enjoy photography, give one clear reason, and one short example of what you photograph.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures. I’m especially interested in photography because I like capturing light and color, so when I buy a new phone I always check the camera specs. For example, I often photograph sunsets and street scenes around my neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Improve clarity, grammar and vocabulary. Give a direct preference, then one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., because, so). Avoid unclear adjectives like “brutal” unless you explain. Keep under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I live in a city and enjoy its variety. For example, cityscapes offer interesting architecture and lively streets, so I can photograph different moods and details at any time.

Sugerencia: Be concise and precise. Start with a direct answer, give one clear reason, and a specific example. Correct phrasing like “I’ve seen other countries on TV” and avoid filler sentences. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I’m familiar with its variety of scenery. For example, our four-season climate creates colorful landscapes in autumn and snowy scenes in winter, which I enjoy photographing.

× I personally when I want to buy a new phone, I specifically checking the camera specifications since I'm found photography fascinating and intriguing.

✓ Personally, when I want to buy a new phone, I specifically check the camera specifications because I find photography fascinating and intriguing.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'checking' should be base form 'check' after modal/time clause; 'I'm found' is incorrect passive/present continuous and should be active present simple 'I find'. Also 'since' used for reason is acceptable but 'because' is clearer. Suggestion: use present simple for general truths (I find) and use base verb after expressions of intention/time (when I want ... I check). (Matches Grammar Problem Types 6 and 8 and 9)

× I live in a city with the brutal urban areas and so I used to taking pictures in those areas.

✓ I live in a city with many large urban areas, so I usually take pictures there.

Errors: 'brutal' is inappropriate adjective; 'used to taking' is incorrect combination — 'used to' + base verb (used to take) or 'usually take' for habitual action. Tense/aspect should be present habitual because student currently lives there. Suggestion: choose accurate adjective and use present simple for habitual actions. (Matches Grammar Problem Types 6 and 8)

× I found the city very beautiful since you when you want to take pictures from different aspects.

✓ I find the city very beautiful because you can take pictures from many different angles.

Errors: tense mismatch 'found' (past) should be present 'find' for current opinion; extraneous 'you when you' and incorrect phrase 'from different aspects' should be 'from many different angles'. Suggestion: use present simple for current opinions and simplify structure, use 'can' for ability. (Matches Grammar Problem Types 6, 26, and 12)

× It's a tricky question since I haven't lived abroad and I always saw other countries in the TV.

✓ It's a tricky question because I haven't lived abroad and I have always seen other countries on TV.

Errors: tense inconsistency — 'haven't lived' (present perfect) should pair with present perfect 'have always seen' not simple past 'saw'. Preposition 'in the TV' should be 'on TV'. Suggestion: keep consistent aspect when relating past experience to present (present perfect) and use correct preposition for media. (Matches Grammar Problem Types 5, 11)

× I would answer this question. I prefer my own country.

✓ I would answer that I prefer my own country.

Issue: 'I would answer this question.' is a short, awkward fragment; combine into a single clear sentence 'I would answer that I prefer my own country.' Suggestion: make responses concise and directly tied to the question. (Matches Grammar Problem Types 26 and 23)

× It is a four season country which has picturesque city and beautiful landscapes.

✓ It is a four-season country which has picturesque cities and beautiful landscapes.

Errors: compound adjective needs a hyphen 'four-season' and 'city' should be plural 'cities' to match 'picturesque' or use 'a picturesque city' if singular. Suggestion: use hyphen for compound adjectives before nouns and ensure noun number agrees with description. (Matches Grammar Problem Types 1 and 22)