Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers (umm, uh) and repetition, and correct word order and grammar (e.g., “I like taking pictures of different views because…”). Keep answers under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I like to photograph places when I travel because photos help me remember the trip and capture unique details. Also, I often share my favorite shots on social media so friends can see the places I visit.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer first, then support it with specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear or incomplete sentences. Replace vague phrases with concrete descriptions (e.g., ‘quieter streets’, ‘cleaner air’, ‘traditional architecture’).

Ejemplo: I prefer taking pictures in rural areas. Rural locations usually have quieter streets, cleaner air and traditional buildings, which make more peaceful and attractive photographs. For example, a village lane lined with old houses and fields often creates a more interesting composition than a busy city street.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear position and justify it with specific comparisons or examples. Reduce hesitation words and repetition. Use linking words like 'however' or 'for example' to structure the answer and make it more convincing.

Ejemplo: I don't mind whether the views are in my own country or abroad, because what matters is the scenery. For example, my country has mountains and coastal areas that are very scenic, so I can find beautiful views locally. However, if I travel abroad I might discover different landscapes or cultural scenes that are also worth photographing.

× Confuse Oh, absolutely.

✓ Oh, absolutely.

The word 'Confuse' is incorrectly inserted and creates a sentence fragment; remove it to form a complete response. Start with a simple interjection 'Oh, absolutely.' to answer clearly.

× I like them taking pictures of different views because some the major reason is that if I'm, if I'm going somewhere else, umm, I like to take picture because it's it's a nice way to for to keep for remember and obviously there are lots of fun different platform where I can post it and share it with my friends, which is.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because one major reason is that if I go somewhere else, I like to take pictures because it's a nice way to keep memories, and there are lots of different platforms where I can post them and share them with my friends.

Multiple issues: incorrect use of 'them taking' (use gerund 'taking' after 'like'), awkward phrase 'some the major reason' (use 'one major reason'), incorrect tense 'if I'm ... going' (use simple present 'if I go' for habitual/conditional), singular 'take picture' should be plural 'take pictures', redundant 'to for to keep for remember' should be 'to keep memories', 'platform' should be plural 'platforms', and pronoun agreement 'post it and share it' should be 'post them and share them' referring to pictures. Suggestions: use gerund after 'like', simplify conditional to 'if I go', ensure noun/pronoun number agreement, and remove redundant words.

× Actually I prefer both but in this these days I prefer taking pictures in the villages because obviously there are less number of vehicles and less number of people and less, less pollution as compared to city.

✓ Actually I prefer both, but these days I prefer taking pictures in villages because there are fewer vehicles, fewer people, and less pollution compared to the city.

Use 'fewer' for countable nouns (vehicles, people) and 'less' for uncountable nouns (pollution). Remove redundant words 'in this these days' and use 'in villages' or 'in the villages' depending on meaning; here general 'in villages' is natural. Also add 'the' before 'city' or 'compared to cities' for clarity.

× And apart from this the people are the villages. People are who are in villages. They do fall.

✓ Also, the people in villages are friendly and relaxed.

Original sentences are fragmented and unclear ('people are the villages' and 'They do fall' make no sense). Rephrase to convey a plausible idea: use a single clear sentence describing villagers' characteristics. Ensure subject and predicate form a complete clause.

× MMM, umm, I really don't mind about this because, umm, it's about the view.

✓ I really don't mind this because it's about the view.

Verb 'mind' is followed directly by the object without 'about' when meaning 'I do not care'. Using 'about' is unnecessary here. Also remove filler words for clarity.

× So even in my, my own country, there are lots of beautiful places and, and lots of beautiful views.

✓ Even in my own country, there are many beautiful places and views.

Reduce repetition and use 'many' instead of 'lots of' for formality; remove duplicate 'my' and extra 'and'. This improves fluency and conciseness.

× So I don't think I really have to visit another country for better views.

✓ So I don't think I really need to visit another country for better views.

Use 'need to' rather than 'have to' to express lack of necessity or personal requirement; 'have to' can imply obligation. Both are grammatical but 'need to' is more natural here.