Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Use correct verb forms and reduce redundancy; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep answers natural and concise (max 4–5 sentences). Replace phrases like "capturing pictures" and "for the life long time" with more natural expressions, and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. I take photos to preserve memories and to share them with friends and family. For example, I often photograph sunsets and landscapes so I can look back on those moments later.

Sugerencia: Eliminate filler words and repetitions, and use linking words to make the answer coherent. Begin with a direct statement of preference, give one clear reason with a specific example, and finish with a brief concluding remark.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas to urban ones because they are quieter and more peaceful. For instance, I enjoy taking long drives through the countryside and stopping to photograph fields and old houses. That calm atmosphere makes rural views more appealing to me.

Sugerencia: Correct pronoun use and tighten the structure: state your preference clearly, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "so many things" and use concrete examples (places, activities). Keep it concise and coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to its culture and landscapes. For example, I enjoy visiting different states to photograph local festivals and night skylines. Also, being familiar with the language and customs makes exploring and taking photos more comfortable for me.

× Absolutely, I love to capturing pictures and capturing the moments in the camera because I think this helps me to keep the memories for the life long time and I can share the memories with my future friends and my kids and the future family.

✓ Absolutely, I love capturing pictures and capturing moments with my camera because I think this helps me keep memories for a lifetime and I can share them with my future friends, my children, and my future family.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the base verb plus -ing (gerund), so 'to capturing' is incorrect; use 'love capturing' (Grammar problem type ID 8). 'Capturing the moments in the camera' is awkward; use 'capturing moments with my camera' (preposition and noun choice: ID 11 and 22). 'Keep the memories for the life long time' has article and word order issues; correct to 'keep memories for a lifetime' (article/word choice: ID 22 and 26). 'My kids and the future family' is redundant and uses an unnecessary definite article; use 'my children and my future family' (pronoun/article choice: ID 12 and 22). Suggestions: use gerund after 'love', prefer 'with my camera', replace 'the life long time' with 'a lifetime', and use consistent nouns 'children' and 'future family'.

× Umm I prefer views in the rural areas over urban areas because rural areas are more quiet and peaceful.

✓ Umm, I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because rural areas are quieter and more peaceful.

Use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A over B' for comparisons (preposition: ID 11). 'Views in the rural areas' should be 'views in rural areas'—omit unnecessary definite article (article error: ID 22). 'More quiet' is less natural than comparative 'quieter' (comparative form: ID 25). Also compare 'views in rural areas to those in urban areas' for clarity (pronoun/reference: ID 12). Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y', omit unnecessary 'the', and use 'quieter'.

× I love peaceful areas as per I can go for a long drive in the rural areas and for the peaceful thing I would prefer rural areas over urban.

✓ I love peaceful areas because I can go for long drives in rural areas, and for peace I would prefer rural areas to urban areas.

'As per' is incorrectly used; use 'because' to give a reason (conjunction error: ID 16). 'Go for a long drive' can be pluralized to 'go for long drives' to match general preference (singular/plural: ID 1). 'For the peaceful thing' is awkward; use 'for peace' (word choice/structure: ID 26). 'Prefer rural areas over urban' should be 'prefer rural areas to urban areas' (preposition/comparison: ID 11 and 25). Suggestion: replace 'as per' with 'because', use plural 'drives' for general habits, and use 'prefer X to Y'.

× I prefer you in my own country rather than any other country because I feel more connected to my country and I would love to explore the other states as per There are so many things, so many interesting things to see in my country and the skyline in the nights everything are so peaceful and relaxing.

✓ I prefer my own country to any other because I feel more connected to it, and I would love to explore other states. There are so many interesting things to see in my country, and the night skyline is so peaceful and relaxing.

'I prefer you in my own country' incorrectly uses 'you' instead of 'my own country' (pronoun error: ID 12). Use 'prefer A to B' not 'rather than' here for clarity (preposition: ID 11). 'Explore the other states' should be 'explore other states'—omit 'the' (article error: ID 22). 'As per' is wrong for linking ideas; remove it and split sentences for clarity (conjunction/structure: ID 16 and 26). 'The skyline in the nights everything are so peaceful' has subject-verb agreement and word order problems; correct to 'the night skyline is so peaceful and relaxing' (subject-verb agreement: ID 27 and sentence structure: ID 26). Suggestions: use correct pronouns ('it' for country), use 'prefer A to B', avoid 'as per', and rewrite the skyline clause with singular subject and verb.