Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a brief clear topic sentence and then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. 注意文法と数の一致（picture → pictures）。短く自然な表現を心がけ、追加説明は具体的な例を1つだけにすること。

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I go on picnics with friends, I usually take multiple photos of the scenery and candid moments to remember the day.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples and use correct tense and vocabulary. 動詞の時制（took → take）と名詞の形（luminous → lights）を直し、接続表現（for example, when）を使って論理的につなぐとよい。

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood; I sometimes prefer urban views. For example, when I’m in an ‘urban mood’, I go to rooftops to take photos of the city skyline, especially at night when the city lights look beautiful.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence, avoid contractions in formal speaking (’cause → because), and provide a specific reason or brief example. 文法（new experience → new experiences）と語彙（refreshing を具体化）を改善すると、説得力が上がる。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new landscapes and cultures. For instance, seeing different architecture and natural scenery abroad feels refreshing and inspires me to take more creative photos.

× Yes, taking picture is definitely one of my favorite hobbies.

✓ Yes, taking pictures is definitely one of my favorite hobbies.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it follows the gerund phrase 'taking' and refers to pictures in general. Use plural to match the idea of multiple instances: 'taking pictures'. Suggestion: Use 'pictures' when talking about the activity in general or multiple items.

× If I am having an urban vibe, I will definitely go to rooftops and took pictures of the city landscape and sometime at the night time where I could see the luminous of the cities.

✓ If I am in an urban mood, I will definitely go to rooftops and take pictures of the city landscape, sometimes at night when I can see the city lights.

Multiple issues corrected per allowed types: 'took' is past tense but the conditional uses present/future so use base form 'take' after 'will'. 'Having an urban vibe' is informal; 'in an urban mood' is more natural. 'Sometime at the night time' should be 'sometimes at night'. 'Where I could see' should be 'when I can see' for present/future reference. 'Luminous of the cities' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'city lights'. Suggestion: Keep verb tenses consistent in conditionals (if + present -> will + base verb), use 'take' after 'will', and prefer natural collocations like 'city lights'.

× I prefer views in other countries 'cause I like going to new places and new experience.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I like going to new places and having new experiences.

'Cause' is informal slang for 'because' so replace with 'because' in formal speech. 'New experience' should be plural 'new experiences' to match 'going to new places' and to indicate multiple experiences. Also add 'having' to make the noun phrase grammatical: 'having new experiences'. Suggestion: Use 'because' in formal contexts and use plural form when referring to general repeated experiences.