Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve fluency and correctness by fixing small grammar errors and tightening sentences. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Add one specific brief example with a time reference to make it more vivid.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I'm not really into photography; I prefer to enjoy the moment with my own eyes. For example, when I travel, I usually put my phone in my bag so I can fully focus on the scenery and the experience. As a result, I feel more relaxed and notice small details I would otherwise miss.

Sugerencia: Good content and coherence; reduce repetition and vary vocabulary. Use a clear topic sentence then one supporting detail with a linking phrase. Add a brief comparison or reason to strengthen the answer.

Ejemplo: I generally prefer rural views because the spectacular scenery and fresh air help me relax. For instance, I once spent an afternoon by a tranquil lake surrounded by mountains, which let me unwind and think clearly. Compared with cities, rural areas feel calmer and less stressful.

Sugerencia: Clarify grammar and make sentences more concise. Use linking words to explain reasons and give one concrete example of a country or landmark to make the answer specific.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy experiencing new cultures and architectural styles. For example, visiting the historic district in Kyoto exposed me to traditional wooden buildings and tea houses, which inspired new ideas about design. Therefore, traveling abroad broadens my perspective.

× I prefer enjoy the moment with my own eyes rather than stopping to take photos.

✓ I prefer enjoying the moment with my own eyes rather than stopping to take photos.

After 'prefer' when comparing activities, the gerund form (verb + -ing) is required for the verb that follows. Use 'prefer enjoying' not 'prefer enjoy'. Suggestion: use 'prefer doing X rather than doing Y' or 'prefer to do X rather than do Y'.

× For example, when I go travel, I usually put my phone in my bag so that I can fully focus on the scenery and the experience rather than worrying about getting the perfect shot.

✓ For example, when I go traveling, I usually put my phone in my bag so that I can fully focus on the scenery and the experience rather than worry about getting the perfect shot.

The phrase 'go travel' is incorrect; use 'go traveling' (verb + -ing) or 'travel'. Also after 'rather than' when contrasting with 'can fully focus' it's natural to use the base verb 'worry' rather than the gerund. Suggestions: 'when I travel' or 'when I go traveling'; use 'rather than worry'.

× For example, I loved the tranquil lake surrounded by mountains.

✓ For example, I loved the tranquil lake that was surrounded by mountains.

The original is understandable but lacks a linking element; adding 'that was' clarifies the passive description 'surrounded by mountains'. This uses past tense 'loved' consistently and makes the modifier grammatically clear. Suggestion: use 'that was surrounded by' or simply 'the tranquil lake surrounded by mountains' is acceptable in spoken English, but formally add 'that was'.

× I enjoyed sitting there for a long time to unwind and think.

✓ I enjoyed sitting there for a long time to unwind and to think.

This sentence is mostly correct. To improve parallelism, use 'to unwind and to think' or keep 'unwind and think' as coordinated verbs. No grammatical error per the list, but parallel infinitives improve clarity. Suggestion: 'enjoyed sitting there for a long time to unwind and to think.'

× For example, when I travel, I usually go to historical districts.

✓ For example, when I travel, I usually go to historic districts.

Both 'historical' and 'historic' are used, but 'historic' is more appropriate for districts significant in history. This is a word choice issue related to adjectives rather than a strict grammar category; however it affects meaning. Suggestion: use 'historic districts' for places with historical importance.

× Those experience give me different perspectives on my life and inspire new ideas.

✓ Those experiences give me different perspectives on my life and inspire new ideas.

The noun should be plural 'experiences' to agree with the plural demonstrative 'those'. This is a singular/plural issue (ID 1) combined with noun form; I classify it under needing plural. Suggestion: use 'Those experiences' so subject and demonstrative agree.