Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and add specific details or a brief example. Avoid repetition (e.g., “when I go traveling” twice). Use linking words to connect ideas and a clear topic sentence. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., “landscapes,” “scenery,” “shots”) and include one or two reasons why you enjoy it.

Ejemplo: Yes — I love photographing landscapes, especially while traveling. For example, when I visited Kyoto last year I spent mornings capturing temple gardens because the light was beautiful. I keep my best shots as wallpapers and share others with friends, which helps me remember each trip.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and give one or two specific reasons or an example. Correct grammar (e.g., “transport… is” or use “transportation options are”) and use linking words like “because” and “for example” to make the answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because cityscapes offer diverse photo opportunities and public transport is convenient. For example, in Shanghai I can easily hop on a metro or tram to reach different neighborhoods and capture both modern skyscrapers and historic lanes.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence, avoid vague phrases like “a lot of beautiful sceneries,” and give specific examples and reasons. Use linking words to sequence ideas (e.g., “Firstly… Secondly…”). Also correct phrasing: say “scenery” (uncountable) rather than “sceneries.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in China mainly because the country has diverse scenery and travelling at home is more affordable. For instance, I can visit mountains in Yunnan and coastal towns in Fujian without high flight costs, so I can travel more often and enjoy each experience.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different beautiful views, especially when I go traveling.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different beautiful views, especially when I travel.

Using 'go traveling' is not incorrect, but in this context 'when I travel' is more natural and concise. The issue relates to verb form and usage: 'go traveling' is a phrasal verb with 'go' plus -ing, while 'travel' as a simple verb fits the general statement about doing an activity and avoids unnecessary complexity. Suggestion: Use 'when I travel' for general habits or repeated actions to sound more natural.

× Every time when I go traveling in cities or other countries, I prefer to use my camera to take some pictures and probably set them up as my Wallpapers.

✓ Every time I travel in cities or other countries, I prefer to use my camera to take some pictures and probably set them as my wallpapers.

Remove 'when' after 'Every time' (redundant) and use 'travel' instead of 'go traveling' for a cleaner habitual expression. 'Set them up as my Wallpapers' is wordy and has incorrect capitalization: 'wallpapers' should be lowercase and 'set them as my wallpapers' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: Use 'Every time I travel' and 'set them as my wallpapers' for natural phrasing.

× In my opinion, I prefer urban areas because I think that the transport in urban areas are convenient and I can take different kinds of transport throughout the traveling.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer urban areas because I think that transport in urban areas is convenient and I can take different kinds of transport while traveling.

Subject-verb agreement: 'transport' (uncountable noun here) requires the singular verb 'is', not 'are'. Also 'throughout the traveling' is awkward; use 'while traveling' for natural English. 'the transport' can be 'transport' or 'public transport' depending on meaning. Suggestion: Use 'transport ... is convenient' and 'while traveling' for correct agreement and natural phrasing.

× I prefer the views in China because there are a lot of beautiful sceneries in China and I think traveling in China is cheaper than traveling around the world, and I can save my budget and enjoy the experience.

✓ I prefer the views in China because there are many beautiful landscapes, and I think traveling in China is cheaper than traveling around the world, so I can save money and still enjoy the experience.

'Sceneries' is rarely used in English; 'landscapes' or 'scenic places' is better. 'A lot of' is acceptable but 'many' is more concise. 'Save my budget' is unnatural; use 'save money'. Also combine clauses smoothly: use 'so' instead of 'and' to show result. These changes address word choice and verbing style rather than strict grammar category but fall under verb/phrase usage and quantifier/adjective choice. Suggestion: Use 'many beautiful landscapes' and 'save money' and connect clauses with 'so' for clear causation.