Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, I like talking to you.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
Yeah.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
I prefer my country because mine is country. Nature is very gorgeous.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Puntuación: 10.0Sugerencia: Cevap, soruya doğrudan yanıt vermiyor ve alakasız bir ifade içeriyor. Doğru yanıt kısa ve ilgili olmalı; örneğin ilgi duyduğunuz manzara türünü söyleyip nedenini birkaç destekleyici cümleyle açıklayın. Bağlaçlar (because, so, and) kullanarak cevapları birbirine bağlayın ve 3-4 cümleyi geçmeyin.
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially landscapes. I like capturing natural light and colours because they change throughout the day. For example, I often photograph sunsets in nearby parks to document how the sky transforms.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Puntuación: 15.0Sugerencia: Cevap tek kelimeyle verilmiş ve belirsiz; bu tür sorularda tercihinizi net ifade edin ve sebep gösterin. Bir karşılaştırma yaparak daha fazla detay verin (e.g., noise, architecture, nature) ve linking word kullanın (because, however, whereas)
Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural. However, I also appreciate urban views for their interesting architecture and busy streets. For instance, I like to photograph old village roads for atmosphere, whereas I go to the city for modern buildings.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Cevap doğrudan tercihi belirtiyor fakat dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha açık ve akıcı nedenler verin, özgün detaylar ekleyin (örneğin belirli yerler veya türler) ve bağlaçlarla açıklamayı genişletin. Ayrıca yanlış tekrarları kaldırıp 'my country' şeklinde düzgün ifade kullanın.
Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the landscapes and local seasons. The countryside here has beautiful mountains and forests, which I love to photograph, and I know the best spots for different light conditions. When I travel abroad, I enjoy the novelty, but I feel more connected to local scenery.
× Yes, I like talking to you.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures.
The student's response does not answer the examiner's question and also uses an incorrect verb phrase. The question asks about taking pictures of different views, so the reply should use 'taking pictures' (verb + -ing) rather than 'talking to you.' Suggestion: Align your response with the question by repeating the verb phrase or a synonym (e.g., 'Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views.').
× Yeah.
✓ I prefer urban areas.
A one-word reply 'Yeah' is insufficient and does not answer the examiner's question asking for a preference between urban and rural areas. Provide a full sentence that states your preference and, if possible, a brief reason. Suggestion: Use a complete sentence such as 'I prefer urban areas because of the architecture and activities.'
× I prefer my country because mine is country.
✓ I prefer my country because it is my country.
The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing pronoun. 'Mine is country' is ungrammatical. A correct structure uses the pronoun 'it' as the subject and the verb 'is' plus possessive phrase: 'it is my country.' Alternatively, simply say 'I prefer my country.' Suggestion: Use 'it' to refer to 'my country' and maintain natural word order: 'I prefer my country because it is beautiful/where my family is.'
× Nature is very gorgeous.
✓ The natural scenery is very gorgeous.
'Nature is very gorgeous' is understandable but slightly unnatural in this context; 'the natural scenery' or 'the landscapes' fits better when talking about views. Suggestion: Prefer 'the natural scenery is very beautiful' or 'the landscapes are gorgeous.'