Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Work on grammatical accuracy, concise phrasing, and natural collocations. Use a clear topic sentence then one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms (e.g., "I always carry my phone," "I snap a picture"). Also use plural/singular correctly ("flowers").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I often take pictures of lakes, mountains and flowers, and I always carry my phone when I go out, so I can quickly snap a photo whenever something catches my eye.

Sugerencia: Make the response more concise and fluent by using smoother linking phrases and avoiding fillers ("umm"). Start with a clear preference sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words like "because" or "as". Use natural collocations ("rural areas" plural, "a sense of serenity").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I live in a busy city. For example, the greenery, beaches and mountains give me a sense of serenity and help me relax after a hectic week.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and correct grammar and word choice. Remove confusing or incorrect phrases ("salary that they have"). Give a clear reason and a specific supporting detail. Use linking words such as "because" or "since" and avoid repetition. Keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I have already seen most landscapes in my own country. Traveling abroad exposes me to different cultures and scenery, which sparks my curiosity and inspires me to take new photographs.

× I do. I like taking pictures of lakes or mountains or flower.

✓ I do. I like taking pictures of lakes, mountains, or flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the parallel list of plural nouns ('lakes' and 'mountains') and to indicate general preference. Use commas to separate list items for clarity.

× Every time I go out I always have my phone with me.

✓ Every time I go out, I always have my phone with me.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but needs a comma after the introductory clause 'Every time I go out' for correct punctuation. No tense change required; the present simple correctly expresses habitual action.

× Just when I'm coming come across something interesting to my eyes, I've always snap a picture of it.

✓ Whenever I come across something interesting to my eyes, I always snap a picture of it.

Original contains redundant and incorrect verb forms: 'I'm coming come across' mixes progressive and base verb and is incorrect. Use 'come across' or 'whenever I come across' for habitual occurrences. 'I've always snap' mixes present perfect auxiliary with base verb; use simple present 'I always snap' for habitual action.

× I prefer views in the rural area since I live in the city.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas since I live in the city.

Use plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally about countryside settings, and omit the definite article 'the' to indicate general preference. 'The rural area' suggests a specific area, which is not intended.

× I enjoy looking at the greenery or umm, beautiful beaches or mountains umm.

✓ I enjoy looking at greenery, beautiful beaches, or mountains.

Omit filler words like 'umm' in formal responses. 'The greenery' can be used but 'greenery' without article is natural when speaking generally. Use commas to separate list items.

× It brings sort of serenity and peace to my mind.

✓ It brings a kind of serenity and peace to my mind.

'Sort of' is informal and vague; 'a kind of' or simply 'serenity and peace' is clearer. Including the indefinite article 'a' before 'kind' makes the phrase grammatically complete.

× I prefer views in other country just simply because I have almost seen every landscape in my country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries simply because I have almost seen every landscape in my country.

Use plural 'other countries' when speaking generally. Remove redundant 'just' before 'simply' or keep one; here 'simply' suffices. 'Other country' is incorrect as a general category.

× I travel a lot domestically so the the salary that they have in foreign countries or trigger my curiosity to travel.

✓ I travel a lot domestically, so the higher salaries in foreign countries trigger my curiosity to travel.

Original has duplicated 'the the', incorrect article usage, and unclear structure. 'The salary that they have' is awkward; use 'higher salaries in foreign countries'. Remove 'or' which is incorrect here. Add comma before 'so' joining two clauses. This corrects sentence structure and makes meaning clear.