Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, fluency and coherence: give a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and concise supporting details (limit to 3–4 sentences). Add linking words and specific examples to make it more natural. For example, replace "it can helps me memory the things" with "they help me remember places and moments." Also correct tense and prepositions: "when I get back home" and "I look at the photos."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially when I travel. When I visit a new place I usually take several photos because they help me remember the scenery and the people I met. Then, when I get back home, I often look through the pictures to relive the experience.

Sugerencia: Clarify and streamline your response: start with a direct topic sentence stating preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Correct phrasing ("prefer rural areas" not "prefer to the rural areas") and avoid repetition. Use specific vocabulary (e.g. skyline, countryside, lakes, mountains).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I live in a busy city. For example, I see the skyline and rooftops every day, so I enjoy visiting the countryside to see mountains, fields and lakes for a change of scenery.

Sugerencia: Organize answer with a clear statement and concise explanation. Use correct grammar ("both" needs clarification), consistent tense, and smoother linking words ("for short trips... but for longer trips..."). Give specific examples of countries or types of views you like abroad to enrich content.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views in both my own country and abroad, but for different reasons. For short breaks of three to five days I usually stay in my country because travel time is shorter; however, for longer trips of nine days or more I prefer to travel abroad to experience different cultures and landscapes.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different views because I like to travel.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like to travel.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'different views' implies multiple items; plural agreement is required between the noun and the context. Use plural when referring to more than one item.

× When I travel to a different place I usually take photos.

✓ When I travel to different places I usually take photos.

The singular 'a different place' is acceptable but sounds less natural with 'usually' and 'photos'. Changing to plural 'different places' matches the habitual present tense 'usually' and the plural 'photos'. This improves number agreement and naturalness.

× Of course it can helps me memory the things.

✓ Of course it can help me remember things.

'Can' is a modal verb and must be followed by the base form 'help', not 'helps'. 'Memory' is a noun; use the verb 'remember' to express recalling. Also 'the things' is unnecessary—use 'things' or specify what things.

× And when I back home I take the phone and I view the picture, I think the place I will used to be.

✓ And when I get back home I take my phone and look at the pictures; I think about the places I used to be.

Multiple issues: 'back home' needs a verb 'get back home' for correct structure. 'Take the phone' should be 'take my phone' (pronoun issue but treated as sentence structure). 'View the picture' is awkward; use 'look at the pictures'. 'I think the place I will used to be' mixes tenses and incorrect verb forms: use 'I think about the places I used to be' or better 'I remember the places I used to visit.' 'Used to' requires base verb and indicates past habit.

× I prefer to the rural areas because I live in the city.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I live in the city.

The verb 'prefer' is not followed by the preposition 'to' in this structure. Remove 'to' and use 'prefer rural areas' or 'prefer the rural areas' if specific. Also 'the rural areas' is general, so 'rural areas' is more natural.

× I watch the skyline every day and the roof view every day.

✓ I see the skyline and the rooftops every day.

'Watch' is unnatural for passive observation of a skyline; use 'see'. Repeating 'every day' twice is redundant—place it once. 'Roof view' is unclear; 'rooftops' or 'rooftop view' is better.

× I don't have any time to go to the countryside, so I prefer to see the mountain, the fields or the lakes.

✓ I don't have time to go to the countryside, so I prefer to see mountains, fields, or lakes.

'Any time' is acceptable but 'time' is more natural. Use plurals 'mountains, fields, or lakes' when speaking generally. Article 'the' is unnecessary before the nouns when speaking in general.

× I'd like to say I will have both.

✓ I'd like to say I would have both.

Context is hypothetical preference; 'I'd like to say I would have both' aligns conditionally. If speaking about future plans, 'I will have both' could be acceptable, but the sentence follows a conditional context in the rest of the response, so 'would' is more natural.

× Uh, I travel to my country when I have a short holiday or vacation like 3 day or five day, I visit my country.

✓ I travel around my country when I have a short holiday or vacation, like three or five days.

Sentence is repetitive and has number and article errors: '3 day or five day' should be 'three or five days' with plural 'days'. Remove the repeated clause 'I visit my country'. Use commas to separate clauses and write numbers as words in speech contexts.

× If I have a long vacation like 9 days or even long, I visit the other countries because I want to see different country.

✓ If I have a long vacation, like nine days or longer, I visit other countries because I want to see different countries.

Use plural 'countries' when speaking generally. '9 days or even long' should be 'nine days or longer'. Maintain conditional present 'If I have...' with present tense main clause 'I visit' is acceptable for scheduled plans, but plural and comparative phrasing need correction.