Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct collocations (say "taking photographs of landscapes/scenery"), and keep to 2–4 concise sentences. Add one specific detail to support your answer and use a linking word for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different kinds of scenery. It helps me relax and feel peaceful, so when I travel I usually take both photos and short videos of interesting landscapes. For example, last year I filmed a sunrise over the mountains and it was very calming.

Sugerencia: Clarify your preference and give coherent, accurate reasons. Avoid contradictory statements (you said rural air is polluted but then praised urban fresh air and natural scenery). Use correct grammar, comparative forms, and linking words (because, however, and). Limit to 2–3 sentences and include a specific example.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the variety of architecture and lively street scenes. However, I also appreciate parks and rivers in cities where the air feels fresher, for example the central park near my home has tree-lined paths and a nice riverbank.

Sugerencia: Make a clearer, more confident statement and reduce hesitations. Use correct verb forms and more specific supporting details (mention particular places). Use one linking phrase (for example, because, such as) and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and meaningful to me. For example, Bangladesh has beautiful beaches, hills and rivers that I want to explore, such as Cox's Bazar and the hills in Sylhet.

× Yes, I love taking photography of different sceneries.

✓ Yes, I love taking photographs of different scenes.

'Photography' is an uncountable noun referring to the activity; to refer to individual images use the plural countable 'photographs'. 'Sceneries' is not commonly used in English; use 'scenes' or 'scenery' (uncountable). This correction keeps meaning and fits the question context.

× Uh, it's a give me a sense of relaxation and peacefulness.

✓ It gives me a sense of relaxation and peace.

The original mixes contractions and word order incorrectly ('it's a give me...'). Use the simple present 'gives' for habitual feelings. 'Peacefulness' is correct but 'peace' is more natural here. Use subject 'It' and verb 'gives' to form a correct sentence.

× When I travel, I probably, uh, taking photos and short uh, videos on sceneries.

✓ When I travel, I usually take photos and short videos of scenes.

After the temporal clause 'When I travel' use present simple for habitual actions. 'Probably' is awkward here; 'usually' better conveys habit. Use base verb form 'take' not continuous 'taking'. Preposition 'of' is correct; 'on sceneries' is incorrect—use 'of scenes' or 'of the scenery'.

× I prefer urban areas rather than rural areas because the air of rural areas very polluted and the urban areas people get fresh air more more landscape and beautiful scenery in nature.

✓ I prefer urban areas to rural areas because the air in rural areas is very polluted, and people in urban areas get fresher air and more beautiful landscapes.

'Prefer A to B' is the correct structure rather than 'rather than' when comparing preferences. Use 'air in rural areas' (preposition 'in') and include the verb 'is' for 'very polluted'. Word order 'people in urban areas' is needed. 'Get fresher air' is comparative; 'more more' is a repetition and should be 'more' or 'more beautiful landscapes' to express greater quantity/quality.

× I prefer views in my own country because uh, it's feel like my own and uh, in Bangladesh has beautiful scenery like mountains, sea, beach, you know, every place I uh, cannot uh, explore, but I want to explore this place.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because it feels like home, and Bangladesh has beautiful scenery such as mountains, seas, and beaches; there are many places I have not explored but want to visit.

Use 'it feels' (third-person singular verb agreement) instead of 'it's feel'. 'Feel like my own' is unnatural; 'feels like home' is idiomatic. Sentence fragment 'in Bangladesh has beautiful scenery' needs a subject—include 'Bangladesh has'. Use plural 'seas' and 'beaches' or 'the sea and beaches'. Replace 'every place I cannot explore' (incorrect modal/time reference) with 'many places I have not explored' to indicate past lack of experience and 'want to visit' for intention.