Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ответ звучит понятно, но есть ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении. Стоит сказать прямо и добавить небольшое объяснение, используя Present Simple для привычек и избегая ненужных слов. Также можно использовать связку причин и последствий (because, so) и правильную форму глагола: "take" вместо "took". Постарайтесь дать не более 3–4 предложений и избегать заполнителей (uh).

Ejemplo: No, I don't like taking pictures of views because I feel shy when I take out my phone in public. So I usually enjoy the scene without photographing it.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит хорошую идею, но есть логическая неясность и неточная структура ("I prefer views in urban and both urban and rural areas" — противоречиво). Лучше дать чёткий выбор или сказать, что нравится оба варианта, и подкрепить это конкретными причинами и примерами. Избегайте разговорных сокращений (’cause) и неуклюжих фраз ("piece of masterpiece").

Ejemplo: I actually like both urban and rural views. Urban areas fascinate me with architecture and street life, while rural landscapes appeal to me because of their calmness and natural beauty.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит полезную информацию, но формулировки и времена нужно поправить. Избегайте слов-паразитов (uh) и используйте Present Simple для устойчивых предпочтений. Фразу "I was only in Turkey" можно заменить на "I have only been to Turkey". Дайте объяснение конкретнее (например, примеры мест или воспоминаний).

Ejemplo: I have only been to Turkey, so I prefer the views in my own country because they are familiar and remind me of childhood memories, like the local parks and coastline I used to visit.

× No, I don't like because I feel shy when I took my phone to take a picture.

✓ No, I don't like it because I feel shy when I take my phone to take a picture.

The sentence mixes present simple ('I don't like', 'I feel') with past tense ('took'), which is inconsistent. Use present tense 'take' to match the general habit. Also add 'it' after 'like' to be natural: 'I don't like it'. Suggestion: Use consistent tense for habitual actions (present simple): 'I feel shy when I take my phone to take a picture.'

× I prefer views in urban and both urban and rural areas 'cause I think everything in this planet is beautiful and I love art, so I see everything like it's a piece of masterpiece.

✓ I prefer both urban and rural views because I think everything on this planet is beautiful and I love art, so I see everything as a masterpiece.

Problems: redundant phrase 'in urban and both urban and rural areas' and informal ' 'cause'. Preposition 'in this planet' is incorrect; use 'on this planet'. 'See everything like it's a piece of masterpiece' is unidiomatic: use 'see everything as a masterpiece.' Suggestions: simplify to 'I prefer both urban and rural views because I think everything on this planet is beautiful and I love art, so I see everything as a masterpiece.' Maintain present tense for preferences.

× To this question I can give an uh, very interesting answer because I was only in Turkey and I prefer my own views in my country.

✓ To this question I can give a very interesting answer: I have only been to Turkey, and I prefer sights in my own country.

Issues: 'was only in Turkey' is vague and mixes past simple with present preference; use present perfect 'have only been to Turkey' to express life experience. 'I prefer my own views in my country' is unnatural: use 'I prefer sights in my own country' or 'I prefer the views in my own country.' Remove filler 'uh' and use a colon or conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: 'I have only been to Turkey, and I prefer the views in my own country.'

× I love it since childhood, that's why I preferred more.

✓ I have loved it since childhood, which is why I prefer it now.

'I love it since childhood' requires present perfect 'have loved' to connect past start to present. 'That's why I preferred more' incorrectly uses past tense 'preferred' and vague 'more'. Use present 'prefer' to state current preference and clarify object: 'I prefer it now.' Suggestion: 'I have loved it since childhood, which is why I prefer it now.'