Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and concise; reduce hesitations and repeat words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief supporting detail using a linking phrase. (English (Japan))

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because changing the angle reveals new details. For example, a building shot from above shows its roof pattern, while a low angle highlights its height, so I often experiment to find the best composition.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and then one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words; keep sentences natural and varied. (English (Japan))

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural scenery and the sense of calm it gives me. For instance, I like mountain silhouettes at sunrise and the sound of waves by the sea, which feel more peaceful than busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and explain clearly with a specific reason and example; remove hesitations and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas. (English (Japan))

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they expose me to different landscapes and cultures. For example, seeing ancient temples or unfamiliar street scenes abroad broadens my perspective and often inspires new photographic ideas.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because if, if I change the angles, uh, it's, I can see different things, different perspective, you know?

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because if I change the angles, I can see different things and different perspectives.

The sentence misuses pauses and omits plural for 'perspective'. 'Like' + verb requires the -ing form 'taking' (correct). Use 'if I change' (conditional) and join clauses without filler words. Use plural 'perspectives' to match 'different'. Remove disfluencies and unnecessary commas to improve clarity. Suggestion: practice forming conditional clauses and plural nouns. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I like the view in rural areas because I like nature. Mountains, seas, uh, beautiful of nature is uh, essential and real. So, umm, I prefer rural area. Also, I live in the rural area.

✓ I like the views in rural areas because I like nature. Mountains and seas, the beauty of nature, are essential and real. So, I prefer rural areas. Also, I live in a rural area.

Multiple issues: countable nouns require correct plural/singular forms. 'View' should be plural when talking about 'rural areas' generally: 'views in rural areas'. 'Mountains and seas' are plural and the phrase 'the beauty of nature' is a noun phrase; use 'are' to agree with compound subject or rephrase. 'Rural area' needs article: general preference uses plural 'rural areas', while 'a rural area' is correct when stating where you live. Suggestion: decide singular vs plural context and use articles appropriately. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I prefer the view in other countries because it's very different from ours. I, I, I I want, I want see different culture that makes my mind change different.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because they are very different from ours. I want to see different cultures that change my way of thinking.

Pronoun agreement and verb forms: 'the view' should be plural 'views' when generalizing; refer back with plural pronoun 'they'. 'I want see' is missing 'to' (verb infinitive). 'Different culture' should be plural 'different cultures' if speaking generally. The phrase 'makes my mind change different' is ungrammatical; use 'change my way of thinking' or 'broaden my mind'. Suggestion: use correct pronoun agreement, include 'to' after 'want', and use idiomatic phrases for changing thoughts. Grammar problem type ID:12