Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and confident. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (umm, uh) and repetition. Also correct grammar (e.g., "even though" is used incorrectly here) and limit to up to five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. Although I'm not a professional photographer, I often capture landscapes and cityscapes when I travel because I like preserving memories. For example, I take photos of sunsets and interesting street scenes to share with friends.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference sentence, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Remove hesitations and finish your thought. Use clear comparative language (e.g., "because", "while"). Keep it within five sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer natural subjects like birds, open fields, and unobstructed sunsets. In contrast, urban areas often have tall buildings that block the view and create cluttered backgrounds.

Sugerencia: Answer directly whether you prefer domestic or foreign views, then provide specific supporting details and examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like "for example" or "however" to make the response coherent, and correct tense and grammar.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful coastlines, beaches and mountains that I know well. For example, I often dream of photographing the seaside sunsets at my local beach, but I haven't had many opportunities to travel there recently.

× I like to take pictures even though that I don't know how to take one.

✓ I like taking pictures even though I don't know how to take one.

The error involves verb choice and structure: 'like to take' is acceptable but the sentence uses 'even though that' which is incorrect. Replace 'even though that' with 'even though' and prefer the gerund 'taking' after 'like' for naturalness when describing a hobby. Suggestion: use 'I like taking pictures even though I don't know how to take one.'

× I don't know how to properly take a photo, but umm I really want I I really like to take pictures of different views.

✓ I don't know how to properly take a photo, but I really want to; I really like taking pictures of different views.

The original has repeated words and an unclear structure ('I really want I I really like'). Fix by removing repetitions and using punctuation to separate ideas. Also use 'taking' for consistency when describing a hobby. Suggestion: break into two clear clauses and avoid hesitation words in final version.

× If umm taking pictures, I really want to umm, take a picture of rural areas because umm, I see the birds, the landscape, umm, the, the sunset, we're in new buildings or blocking the view.

✓ When taking pictures, I really want to take pictures of rural areas because I can see the birds, the landscape, and the sunset without new buildings blocking the view.

The phrase 'If taking pictures' is incorrect for expressing usual preference; use 'When taking pictures' or 'If I take pictures'. Also 'we're in new buildings' is wrong; intended meaning is 'new buildings blocking the view'. Corrected to a clear clause and use parallel nouns linked by 'and'. Use 'can see' for ability. Suggestion: start with 'When' and keep nouns parallel: 'birds, the landscape, and the sunset.'

× There are a lot of views, beautiful views Umm located in in my own country, especially Umm in in my country.

✓ There are many beautiful views located in my own country, especially in my coastal and mountainous areas.

The sentence repeats phrases and uses 'a lot of views, beautiful views' awkwardly. Replace 'a lot of' with 'many' for countable 'views'. Remove repeated 'in in my country'. Also provide clearer noun phrases. Suggestion: use 'There are many beautiful views located in my country' and avoid repetition.

× It is known for its beautiful oceans, beaches and mountains.

✓ My country is known for its beautiful oceans, beaches, and mountains.

The pronoun 'It' is ambiguous; specify 'My country' to make the subject clear in context. Also add Oxford comma for clarity. Suggestion: explicitly name the subject when referring to the country.

× And if I want, but I don't really have the chance to go.

✓ I would like to visit them, but I don't really have the chance to go.

The fragment 'And if I want, but I don't really have the chance to go' is ungrammatical and incomplete. Replace with a full conditional or desire statement: 'I would like to visit them, but I don't really have the chance.' Suggestion: avoid starting with 'And' and complete the thought using a proper clause.