Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, I'd like to. Taking pictures of views can help me remember the moment and we I can also share the photos with my friends. It's also fun when I look back these photos.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
I prefer views in rural areas 'cause I was born in a countryside and the rural areas scenery remind me of my childhood. I can also admire the nature scenery such as the sunshine, the blue sky, the breeze which helps me feel relaxed.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
I enjoy views both in my country and abroad, but I prefer slightly the views in my country because they feel familiar to me. However, I also appreciate force foreign landscapes for their novelty and the chance to experience different cultures.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Puntuación: 72.0Sugerencia: Correct some grammar errors, remove redundancy and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Watch verb forms and small words (e.g., "we I" should be removed) and use articles correctly ("these photos").
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, they help me remember special moments and I can share them with friends, so I often take pictures when I travel. Also, looking back at these photos makes me feel nostalgic.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Puntuación: 78.0Sugerencia: Improve grammar (articles, subject-verb agreement) and replace informal contractions with natural spoken phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide one or two concrete sensory details rather than general words like "nature scenery."
Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside, so they remind me of my childhood. For instance, I like the warm sunshine, wide blue skies and gentle breeze, which together help me feel calm and relaxed.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Fix a few awkward phrases and word choice errors (e.g., "prefer slightly the views" and "force foreign landscapes"). Use clearer comparative phrasing and a linking word to contrast familiarity with novelty. Keep it concise and natural.
Ejemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad, but I slightly prefer those in my own country because they feel familiar. On the other hand, I appreciate foreign landscapes for their novelty and the opportunity to experience different cultures.
× Taking pictures of views can help me remember the moment and we I can also share the photos with my friends.
✓ Taking pictures of views can help me remember the moment and I can also share the photos with my friends.
The sentence contains an extra incorrect pronoun 'we' before 'I'. This is a pronoun error causing ungrammatical structure. Remove the extraneous 'we' so the subject is correctly 'I'. Suggestion: read aloud and ensure only one subject pronoun appears.
× It's also fun when I look back these photos.
✓ It's also fun when I look back at these photos.
The verb phrase 'look back' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to reviewing something. Omission of 'at' is a preposition error. Suggestion: learn common verb+preposition collocations such as 'look back at', 'listen to', 'depend on'.
× I prefer views in rural areas 'cause I was born in a countryside and the rural areas scenery remind me of my childhood.
✓ I prefer views in rural areas 'cause I was born in the countryside and the rural scenery reminds me of my childhood.
There are two errors: 'a countryside' is incorrect because 'countryside' is an uncountable noun here and needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific type/place, and 'rural areas scenery' is incorrect word order and lacks agreement and articles. Change to 'the countryside' and 'the rural scenery' (or just 'rural scenery'), and adjust verb 'remind' to 'reminds' to agree with singular 'scenery'. The main flagged type per instructions is article errors; also subject-verb agreement relates to type 27 but only corrections matching list are applied. Suggestion: use 'the countryside' for the general rural environment and ensure noun-verb agreement.
× I can also admire the nature scenery such as the sunshine, the blue sky, the breeze which helps me feel relaxed.
✓ I can also admire the natural scenery, such as the sunshine, the blue sky, and the breeze, which help me feel relaxed.
'Nature scenery' is incorrect adjective form; use 'natural scenery' (adjective form). Also the relative clause refers to multiple items (sunshine, sky, breeze), so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps' to agree with plural subject. This is a subject-verb agreement and adjective use issue; here flagged as subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and ensure verbs agree with their subjects.
× I enjoy views both in my country and abroad, but I prefer slightly the views in my country because they feel familiar to me.
✓ I enjoy views both in my country and abroad, but I slightly prefer the views in my country because they feel familiar to me.
The adverb 'slightly' is misplaced; it should modify 'prefer' (verb) rather than be between auxiliary and noun phrase. This is an adverb placement/preposition-type error; per provided list it best fits incorrect use of prepositions category. Suggestion: place adverbs close to the words they modify: 'slightly prefer'.
× However, I also appreciate force foreign landscapes for their novelty and the chance to experience different cultures.
✓ However, I also appreciate foreign landscapes for their novelty and the chance to experience different cultures.
The word 'force' is incorrect here; likely a typo. Removing 'force' corrects the sentence. This is misuse of a word (adjective/adverb area). Suggestion: proofread for stray words or typos and ensure only intended modifiers are present.