Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and reorganize into a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail. Use linking words and correct grammar (e.g., "it reminds me of places I've visited"). Keep it natural, avoid repetition and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of scenery when I travel because they remind me of the places I visited. For example, a photo of a mountain view helps me remember the hike and the feeling of being there.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference statement, then give a brief reason using linking words (e.g., "however" or "because"). Avoid fillers and unclear phrases like "ignite" — choose precise words such as "at night" or "vibrant". Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: Although I enjoy urban views, especially at night because the lights are vibrant, I prefer rural scenery because it feels natural and peaceful. For instance, quiet fields and forests are more pleasing and relaxing to me.

Sugerencia: This answer is clear and relevant. To improve, add a linking phrase to connect reason and example (e.g., "for example" is good), and include one more specific detail or brief comparison to other countries to enrich content. Keep within 2–3 sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., "familiar," "cultural").

Ejemplo: I prefer scenery in my own country, India, because it feels familiar and closely connected to my culture and traditions. For example, rural landscapes and historic temples remind me of family trips and local festivals, unlike the more unfamiliar urban skylines I see abroad.

× it memor, uh, it Remember Me where I when I visited this place.

✓ it helps me remember where I visited this place.

The student attempted to use 'remember' in a past-related context but used an incorrect form 'Remember Me' and fragmented phrasing. The correct expression is 'helps me remember' where 'remember' is the base form after 'helps'. Use a clear subject and verb: 'it helps me remember...' and remove filler words. Use simple present 'helps' to indicate a habitual or general effect of photos.

× In urban area, I like the views, uh, when it's, uh, ignite because of it, uh, it shows different side of the city,

✓ In urban areas, I like the views when they are lit up because they show different sides of the city,

The student used 'In urban area' (singular) where the plural 'urban areas' is natural when speaking generally. 'It's ignite' is ungrammatical; use 'they are lit up' (passive) to describe views illuminated. Also 'different side' should be plural 'different sides' to agree with 'views'. Ensure plural agreement between subject and verbs/pronouns.

× I like to take pictures around, uh, taking pictures of a scenery when I travel because it memor, uh, it Remember Me where I when I visited this place.

✓ I like to take pictures of scenery when I travel because they help me remember places I have visited.

The phrase 'around, uh, taking pictures of a scenery' uses 'around' awkwardly and 'a scenery' is uncountable; use 'scenery' without 'a'. Also restructure to avoid repetition: 'they help me remember places I have visited' uses present perfect 'have visited' to link past visits to the present effect of photos.

× but I prefer rural area because it's quite natural, which, uh, come or which come come to our mind and it is pleasing.

✓ but I prefer rural areas because they are quite natural, which comes to our mind and is pleasing.

Use plural 'rural areas' for general preference and plural pronoun 'they' with 'are'. However, 'which comes to our mind' refers to 'natural' as a singular concept, so keep singular verb 'comes'. Keep 'is pleasing' to describe the overall effect. Avoid repeated fillers and ensure pronoun-antecedent agreement.

× For example, I love watching countryside and historical temples, which remind me of family trips and local festivals.

✓ For example, I love seeing the countryside and historical temples, which remind me of family trips and local festivals.

'Watching countryside' is awkward; use 'seeing' or 'visiting' the countryside. The present tense 'love' is appropriate; 'remind' correctly agrees with plural noun 'countryside and historical temples'. Use 'the countryside' with definite article for a general concept.