Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more grammatically correct, concise, and include one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief reason and a concrete example. Avoid filler words like "umm" and repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help preserve memories of special trips. For example, when I travelled with my family to the coast last year, I took photos of the sunrise over the sea to remember that peaceful morning.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting points with linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid vague repetitions. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to make it coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because cities offer diverse architecture and lively streets. For example, in my city I enjoy photographing historic buildings, modern skyscrapers and bustling markets because each place has a distinct character.

Sugerencia: State a clear preference and explain with specific reasons and an example. Fix unclear phrases (e.g. "my 1 country") and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like "because" and "for instance".

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a mix of urban and rural scenery close to home. For instance, within a short drive I can photograph modern cityscapes as well as peaceful villages, which makes it easy to find varied subjects.

× Yes I do, I like take a lot photos umm because it's very important to save the nice moments of my life with my family on the travels and I think it's like a good time and good part to save a nice moment for the life.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking a lot of photos because it's very important to save the nice moments of my life with my family when we travel, and I think it's a good way to preserve those memories.

This sentence contains multiple issues relevant to the provided list: incorrect verb form after 'like' (should be the -ing form) and article/word choice problems. According to the list, use item 8 (Verb + -ing form) for 'like take' which should be 'like taking'. Also there are article and phrasing problems (use 'photos' instead of 'a lot photos' and 'when we travel' instead of 'on the travels'). Suggestion: after verbs like 'like', use the -ing form; use 'a lot of photos'; use 'when we travel' or 'on trips'; simplify redundant phrases like 'a good time and good part' to 'a good way' and 'save a nice moment for the life' to 'preserve those memories'.

× I prefer views in urban areas because in urban areas have more building different views, different streets of my country.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because urban areas have more buildings and different streets in my country.

This contains subject-verb and plural errors: the clause 'in urban areas have' omits the subject (subject-verb agreement error, use item 27) and 'building' should be plural 'buildings' (item 1 Singular and plural issue). Also word order and repetition are awkward. Suggestion: include the subject ('urban areas have') and use plural nouns when referring to multiple items ('buildings') and use clear coordination: 'more buildings and different streets'.

× And whatever country you go, you always gonna see different building, different architecture different.

✓ And in whatever country you go, you will always see different buildings and different architecture.

Multiple issues: missing auxiliary/modal correctness ('gonna' is informal and ungrammatical in formal/standard written English; use 'will' — related to Future tense item 7 or Modal verb usage item 4) and plural noun 'building' should be 'buildings' (item 1). Also sentence structure and repetition 'different' at the end is redundant. Suggestion: use 'you will always see' and plural nouns 'buildings' and remove redundant words. Use 'in whatever country you go' or 'wherever you go'.

× I prefer views in my 1 country because in my 1 country I have a lot of mixed views between urban and.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because in my country I have a lot of mixed views, both urban and rural.

The phrase 'my 1 country' is incorrect: it likely intends 'my own country' or 'my country' (article/word choice error, item 22 Article errors and item 26 Sentence structure errors). The sentence also ends abruptly 'between urban and.' which is incomplete; complete pair 'urban and rural' is needed. Suggestion: replace 'my 1 country' with 'my own country' or 'my country' and finish the contrast: 'both urban and rural'.

× And rural areas I cannot have different views from everywhere.

✓ In rural areas I can't see many different views everywhere.

This sentence has awkward word order and unclear meaning; likely a subject-verb and sentence structure error (item 26) and tense/ability phrasing (item 4 Modal verb usage). 'I cannot have different views from everywhere' is unnatural; use 'I can't see many different views everywhere' or 'I don't get as many different views in rural areas.' Suggestion: reorder to subject-first and use natural modal contraction 'can't' or 'do not' and clarify comparison.