Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "memorable moments" and "remind myself of that experience" convey the same idea).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and street scenes because the images help me remember the atmosphere and emotions of those moments; later, I can look back at them and relive the experience.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and one specific supporting detail, using linking words and correcting repetition. Avoid saying the same idea twice ("sense of relaxation" and "relax myself").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I can see seasonal changes clearly. For instance, walking through a countryside trail lets me notice blossoms in spring and golden fields in autumn, which helps me feel calm and refreshed.

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct vocabulary and structure. Start with a clear reason, avoid fillers (uh, umm), and fix incorrect words ("climbers" should be "climates" or "landscapes"). Provide a concise example to illustrate variety.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse landscapes and climates. For example, within a few hours I can see mountains, coasts and plains, so I can easily photograph very different sceneries without traveling abroad.

× I have the habit of taking photos of different sceneries which can help me to remember the memorable moments at that time and the in the future I can remind myself of that experience through these photos.

✓ I have the habit of taking photos of different scenery, which can help me remember memorable moments from that time, and in the future I can remind myself of those experiences through these photos.

The sentence uses 'sceneries' (nonstandard plural) and has unnecessary 'to' after 'help me'. Use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun and 'help me remember' without 'to'. Also 'the memorable moments at that time' is wordy; 'memorable moments from that time' is clearer. 'That experience' should match plural 'photos' so use 'those experiences'. Improve flow by adding commas and removing redundancy.

× I prefer views in rural areas where I can see the change of seasons and and the rural areas always give me a sense of relaxation and I can relax myself there.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas where I can see the changes of the seasons, and the countryside always gives me a sense of relaxation so I can relax there.

'Change of seasons' is better as 'changes of the seasons' or 'the changing seasons'. 'Rural areas' repeated is redundant; 'the countryside' is more natural. 'Relax myself' is unnatural in English; use 'relax' (intransitive). Also remove the repeated 'and' and improve sentence flow with a coordinating conjunction or semicolon.

× I prefer views in my own country. I'm always proud of, uh, living in such a beautiful country which has a wide variety of climbers. So, umm, it's very easy for me to catch different kinds of sceneries in the same.

✓ I prefer views in my own country. I'm always proud of living in such a beautiful country which has a wide variety of climates, so it's very easy for me to see different kinds of scenery in one place.

'Proud of, uh, living' should be 'proud of living' without filler. 'Climbers' is incorrect; the intended word is 'climates'. 'Sceneries' is nonstandard; use 'scenery' (uncountable) or 'scenic views'. 'Catch different kinds of sceneries in the same' is incomplete and unclear; replace with 'see different kinds of scenery in one place' to convey the meaning. Also combine sentences to remove unnecessary fillers.