Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答应更直接、流畅并包含明确细节。避免频繁使用“umm”或模糊短语（如“depends on the social media”）。可以用一到两句说明拍照的动机和偏好，再给出一两个具体例子或感受，句子不超过5句。练习连词（for example, because, so）以增强连贯性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views when I travel. For example, on a recent trip to Busan with my family I took short videos of the seaside and shots of colorful street scenes because I like capturing lively atmospheres for my social media.

Sugerencia: 总体表达清楚且相关，但句子结构略显冗长，有语法和搭配小错误。应简化句子并使用连接词使逻辑更紧凑；注意单复数（e.g. 'every building'），并用更准确的词汇（facades, architecture details）。可补充一两个具体例子说明喜欢的城市元素。

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I study architecture and enjoy examining building facades and structural details. For instance, I love observing historical buildings and modern skyscrapers to compare their styles and construction methods.

Sugerencia: 表达不够礼貌与条理，存在犹豫词和语法错误（如时态、定冠词和名词单复数）。建议去掉消极笼统的评价，改用具体比较和例子说明原因，同时保持礼貌。使用连接词（for example, because）并把句子分为两三句以增强清晰度。

Ejemplo: I generally prefer views in other countries because their urban planning often feels more organized. For example, I visited Busan recently and appreciated its clean streets and well-preserved historical districts, which made sightseeing more enjoyable.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures when I am in vacation.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures when I am on vacation.

句子中介词“in”与短语“on vacation”搭配不正确，英语中表示“在度假时”应使用“on vacation”。建议记住常见固定搭配，如“on vacation/on holiday”。

× For example, recently I went to Busan, South Korea with my family and umm depends on the social media.

✓ For example, recently I went to Busan, South Korea with my family, and I shared photos depending on social media.

原句结构混乱，‘depends on the social media’缺少主语和明确时态。改为‘I shared photos depending on social media’使主语、谓语明确，且表达更自然。建议写句子时确保每个部分有主语和谓语，避免口语填充词影响句子结构。

× I like to take short videos or maybe some umm impressive.

✓ I like to take short videos or maybe some impressive shots.

原句中“some impressive”后缺名词，导致不完整。应补上名词，如“shots”或“photos”。建议注意形容词需修饰名词，确保句子成分完整。

× I do like urban areas rather than rural areas because my major is architecture so I like the highlights of the facades in the city way and I like to know about the history and the structure of every buildings in the city.

✓ I prefer urban areas to rural ones because my major is architecture, so I like the highlights of the facades in the city and I like to learn about the history and the structure of every building in the city.

原句存在比较表达不当、冗长和复数使用错误：1) 使用“prefer A to B”比“do like A rather than B”更自然；2) “rural areas”可用“rural ones”简洁替代；3) “the structure of every buildings”中“every”应跟单数名词，改为“every building”；4) “in the city way”表达不当，改为“in the city”。建议学习常用比较结构和“every”后的名词单数用法。

× To be honest, I like, uh, other countries rather than my own country because I think in my country is too messy and complicated facade that is not organized in every way and it's about the history.

✓ To be honest, I prefer other countries to my own because I think my country is too messy and the facades are too complicated and not well organized in many ways, partly because of its history.

原句时态与结构混乱：1) 比较用法更自然用“prefer other countries to my own”；2) “I think in my country is…”为错误从句结构，正确为“I think my country is…”；3) “complicated facade”须与复数主语一致，改为“the facades are too complicated”；4) “not organized in every way”表达不自然，改为“not well organized in many ways”；5) 增加“partly because of its history”使因果关系更清晰。建议注意句子主语位置和主谓一致，以及使用更自然的比较结构。

× I think I like other country more.

✓ I think I like other countries more.

“other country”应为复数“other countries”或“another country”。句子语境是泛指其他国家，应使用复数。建议根据语境选择单数或复数并保持一致。