School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit confusing and lengthy. Try to be clear and concise. For example, you can say the exact distance and how you reach school in a simple way.

Ejemplo: My school is in Virat Nagar, about 1.5 kilometers from my home. I usually walk to school every day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my school because it has good facilities. Moreover, the teachers are very helpful and teach well.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but the sentence structure is complex and a bit unclear. Use simpler sentences and linking words to make your point clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has a 100% pass rate. Also, the teachers explain lessons in an easy way, which helps students learn better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be more coherent by using better linking words and correcting some grammar mistakes.

Ejemplo: The environment at my school is very friendly. The principal encourages teachers to be kind, so students feel comfortable asking questions without fear.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Interest in study is very important because without it, students cannot learn effectively. For example, when students are interested, they pay more attention in class and during self-study.

× I live in Virat Nagar and my school is near my house which is about 15 kilometre distance from my home from the foot distance.

✓ I live in Virat Nagar and my school is near my house which is about 15 kilometres away from my home on foot.

The word 'kilometre' should be plural 'kilometres' because it refers to a distance greater than one. Also, 'distance from my home from the foot distance' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'away from my home on foot' to indicate walking distance.

× So I have to walk by to reach to this school.

✓ So I have to walk to reach this school.

The preposition 'by' is unnecessary here, and 'reach to' is incorrect; the verb 'reach' does not require 'to' after it. The correct phrase is 'walk to reach this school.'

× I don't think there is anyone who is not attached with the school they studied in or they are in right now.

✓ I don't think there is anyone who is not attached to the school they studied in or are attending right now.

The preposition 'attached with' should be 'attached to'. Also, 'they are in right now' is better expressed as 'are attending right now' for clarity and correctness.

× So I obviously love my school for the facility they provide and also there are very various teachers who are quite good at teaching and also helpful to the students.

✓ So I obviously love my school for the facilities they provide and also there are various teachers who are quite good at teaching and helpful to the students.

The word 'facility' should be plural 'facilities' because it refers to multiple services. 'Very various' is incorrect; 'various' alone suffices.

× Yes, most definitely it is one of the best school in the hometown as the outcome is also can also be seen like that because the result of our school is 100% which has been consistent throughout the years and also because the teachers are very helpful and teaches the student in a very easy way.

✓ Yes, most definitely it is one of the best schools in the hometown as the outcome can also be seen like that because the result of our school is 100% which has been consistent throughout the years and also because the teachers are very helpful and teach the students in a very easy way.

'School' should be plural 'schools' because it is part of 'one of the best schools'. 'Teaches' should be 'teach' to agree with plural subject 'teachers'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context.

× Well, it is a very friendly atmosphere because our principle is very friendly and he also guide the teachers and professors to be kind to a student.

✓ Well, it is a very friendly atmosphere because our principal is very friendly and he also guides the teachers and professors to be kind to the students.

'Principle' is incorrect; the correct word is 'principal'. 'Guide' should be 'guides' to agree with singular subject 'he'. 'A student' should be 'the students' to refer generally to all students.

× So also the students are not scared or they do not fear teachers to ask questions.

✓ Also, the students are not scared and they do not fear teachers when asking questions.

The phrase 'fear teachers to ask questions' is incorrect. It should be 'fear teachers when asking questions' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× So it is kind of a friendliness.

✓ So it is a kind of friendliness.

The phrase 'kind of a friendliness' is awkward; the correct expression is 'a kind of friendliness'.

× It is very important because without interest in the study student will not be able to achieve or gain the knowledge which they are trying to gain even in school when the teacher teach them or even in the self study sessions.

✓ It is very important because without interest in study students will not be able to achieve or gain the knowledge they are trying to gain even in school when the teacher teaches them or even in self-study sessions.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'The study' should be 'study' without 'the'. 'Teacher teach' should be 'teacher teaches' to agree with singular subject. 'Self study' should be hyphenated as 'self-study'.