School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯，句子不完整，建议练习完整表达地理位置，避免断句。

Ejemplo: My school is located in Jinan, which is a city in the western part of Shandong Province.

Sugerencia: 表达情绪过于负面且句子不完整，建议用更自然的表达方式，并补充具体原因。

Ejemplo: I don't like my school very much because the administration is poor and the infrastructure is inconvenient. Also, some teachers are not very supportive.

Sugerencia: 表达较清楚，但语法和词汇使用有误，建议注意语法准确性和词汇搭配。

Ejemplo: I don't think my school is a good place to study because the weather is very hot, and many classrooms don't have air conditioning. Therefore, studying there can be uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: 描述较具体，但语法错误较多，建议练习主谓一致和时态使用。

Ejemplo: My school has a big lake surrounded by trees, and a mountain is reflected on the lake. It's really beautiful, but I often don't feel like appreciating it.

Sugerencia: 表达观点明确，但语法和句子结构不完整，建议加强句子完整性和语法准确性。

Ejemplo: I think interest plays a key role in studying because if you are not interested in a subject, you will lack motivation and find it difficult to learn well.

× My school is. In a city called Jinan, where it's a. West of Shandong Province.

✓ My school is in a city called Jinan, which is in the west of Shandong Province.

原句句子结构不完整，断句错误。应将分散的句子合并成完整句子，使用关系代词"which"引导定语从句，表达更清晰。

× Because it had poor administration.

✓ Because it has poor administration.

描述现在的情况应使用现在时，原句使用了过去时"had"，与上下文时态不符。

× And. The inconvenient infrastructure.

✓ And inconvenient infrastructure.

句子不完整，断句错误。应将短语与前句连接，形成完整句子。

× And the teacher here is really.

✓ And the teachers here are really bad.

"teacher"应为复数形式"teachers"，且句子不完整，需补充形容词描述。

× but a lot of classroom have no air condition.

✓ but a lot of classrooms have no air conditioning.

"classroom"应为复数"classrooms"，"air condition"应为"air conditioning"，表示空调设备。

× So if we study in the classroom or library, we will be sweaty.

✓ So if we study in the classroom or library, we will be sweaty.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× And it really uncomfortable for us.

✓ And it is really uncomfortable for us.

缺少系动词"is"，导致句子不完整。

× Well, my school have a big lake surrounded by the trees and a mountain reflect on the lake.

✓ Well, my school has a big lake surrounded by trees and a mountain reflecting on the lake.

"school"为单数，谓语动词应为"has"，"reflect"应为现在分词"reflecting"，修饰"mountain"。

× That's really beautiful.

✓ That's really beautiful.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× But most of time I have no mood to appreciate them.

✓ But most of the time I have no mood to appreciate them.

缺少定冠词"the"，"most of the time"为固定表达。

× I think interest play a key role on study because when you have no interest on some subject, you will be no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

✓ I think interest plays a key role in study because when you have no interest in some subjects, you will have no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

"interest"为单数，谓语动词应为"plays"；介词应为"in"而非"on"；"subject"应为复数"subjects"；"will be no motivation"应改为"will have no motivation"。

× So if you can't learn it well.

✓ So if you can't learn it well, it will be difficult to succeed.

句子不完整，缺少主句，需补充完整表达。