School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về vị trí và môi trường xung quanh trường.

Ejemplo: My school is located in the city centre, which makes it very convenient to reach by public transport. Moreover, it is surrounded by many parks and shops, as well as a hospital nearby, making the environment comfortable and accessible.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn thích trường học của mình.

Ejemplo: Of course, I like my school because it provides everything I need, such as places to study, eat, and rest. Additionally, the teachers are friendly and supportive, which makes learning enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần được diễn đạt rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Hãy thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về lý do tại sao trường là nơi tốt để học.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my school is a good place to study because it provides all the necessary facilities for studying, eating, and resting comfortably. Moreover, the teachers are very kind and supportive, which is exactly what students need.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi bằng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và mô tả môi trường xung quanh trường một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: The environment at my school is very convenient. It is surrounded by many facilities such as a hospital, markets, and other city amenities that we might need.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần được diễn đạt rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên giải thích rõ hơn về tầm quan trọng của sự hứng thú trong học tập và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I think interest in studying is very important for students because without interest, it is difficult for them to study well and stay motivated.

× My school is located in the city centre which makes it very convenient to reach by public transport.

✓ My school is located in the city centre, which makes it very convenient to reach by public transport.

A comma is needed before 'which' to correctly separate the relative clause from the main clause, improving sentence clarity.

× It's surrounded by many parks, shops from hospital like it's actually very comfortable, very convenient.

✓ It's surrounded by many parks and shops, and a hospital nearby, so it's actually very comfortable and very convenient.

The phrase 'shops from hospital like' is unclear and incorrect. It should be rephrased to correctly express the surroundings using appropriate prepositions and conjunctions.

× Of course, I realized my school because it can adopt me all the things I need study, eating, resting and the teacher is like the friends are friendly, study is good.

✓ Of course, I like my school because it provides me with everything I need: studying, eating, resting, and the teachers are friendly like friends; studying is good.

Incorrect pronoun 'realized' is used instead of 'like'; 'adopt me all the things' is incorrect and should be 'provides me with everything'; sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Of course with you, I think it's a good place to study because it can provide everything we need for studying, eating and resting comfortably.

✓ Of course, I think it's a good place to study because it provides everything we need for studying, eating, and resting comfortably.

The phrase 'Of course with you' is incorrect and unnecessary; 'can provide' is better as 'provides' for present simple tense describing facts.

× I think it's the most good is teachers.

✓ I think the best thing is the teachers.

'Most good' is incorrect; the superlative form of 'good' is 'best'. The sentence structure is also awkward and needs correction.

× Teachers very nice is the what all the students need.

✓ The teachers are very nice, which is what all the students need.

The original sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and correct sentence structure; it needs to be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Very convenient. It's surrounded by so many things like a city around, like hospital, I'm sure market, yes, so many things that can we need.

✓ It's very convenient. It's surrounded by many things like the city around, a hospital, a market, and many other things we need.

Incorrect prepositions and article usage ('like a city around', 'like hospital', 'I'm sure market') make the sentence unclear; proper articles and prepositions are needed.

× Interest in study is the most important thing I think is the student, because without interesting I think students can study well.

✓ Interest in studying is the most important thing for students because without interest, I don't think students can study well.

Incorrect quantifier and word form usage: 'interest in study' should be 'interest in studying'; 'without interesting' should be 'without interest'; sentence structure also improved for clarity.