School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to answer the question directly and clearly first, then add relevant details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to describe location and surroundings.

Ejemplo: My school is located just up the road from my house, so it is very close and easy to reach. However, sometimes there are traffic jams near the school, which can cause some distractions.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'you know'. Use correct verb tenses and grammar. Provide specific reasons why you like your school with clear linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really like my school because it helped me broaden my mind and gain new experiences. Also, meeting many students there made me more confident.

Sugerencia: Speak more fluently without excessive hesitation. Use plural forms correctly and avoid repetition. Provide clear reasons with linking words to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has many dedicated teachers and hardworking students. Moreover, studying there is enjoyable and makes passing time pleasant.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear and complete answer with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to organize your description logically.

Ejemplo: My school is very big and can accommodate about 700 students at the same time. It has well-equipped laboratories and a library, and the teachers are very dedicated.

Sugerencia: Answer the question clearly and avoid confusing or incomplete sentences. Use appropriate vocabulary to explain why interest in study is important, and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ejemplo: I believe having interest in studying is very important because it helps us learn better and succeed in our courses. Without interest, it is hard to work hard and achieve good results.

× Is your school and my school was located just up the Rd. from my house and you know, it was really close and easy to get in but sometimes we saw some traffic jams near our school and you know some distortion and some distractions that happened.

✓ My school was located just up the Rd. from my house and you know, it was really close and easy to get to but sometimes we saw some traffic jams near our school and you know some noise and some distractions that happened.

The original sentence incorrectly starts with 'Is your school and my school was located', which is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The correct past tense form 'was located' should be used with the singular subject 'my school'. Also, 'get in' is better replaced with 'get to' when referring to reaching a place. 'Distortion' is not appropriate here; 'noise' fits better in the context of distractions near a school.

× Absolutely, yes. Uh, it was the most, uh, fascinating time that I've have ever in my life because I can broaden my mind and, you know, expands my experiences, uh, in, in that school and, you know, getting familiar with many students, uh, make me confident.

✓ Absolutely, yes. Uh, it was the most, uh, fascinating time that I've ever had in my life because I could broaden my mind and, you know, expand my experiences, uh, in that school and, you know, getting familiar with many students, uh, made me confident.

The phrase 'I've have ever' is incorrect; it should be 'I've ever had' to correctly use the present perfect tense. 'Can broaden' should be 'could broaden' to match the past context. 'Expands' should be 'expand' to agree with the modal verb. 'Make me confident' should be 'made me confident' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Uh, yes. Uh, it is really, uh, pleasant place for a study because, uh, you can get familiar with many, uh, dedicated teacher and even, uh, you know, hardworking students. Uh, it was, it is really fun that you can pass your time by studying in that place.

✓ Uh, yes. Uh, it is really, uh, a pleasant place for study because, uh, you can get familiar with many, uh, dedicated teachers and even, uh, you know, hardworking students. Uh, it is really fun that you can pass your time by studying in that place.

The phrase 'pleasant place for a study' is incorrect; 'a' should be used before 'pleasant place' and 'study' should be without 'a' as it is uncountable here. 'Many dedicated teacher' should be 'many dedicated teachers' to match plural form. 'It was, it is really fun' is inconsistent; 'it is' fits better for general statements.

× Yeah, my school is really big, which for example has 700, uh, classmate, uh, can be there, uh, in uh, same time.

✓ Yeah, my school is really big, which for example has 700, uh, classmates, uh, who can be there, uh, at the same time.

The word 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' to agree with the number 700. Also, 'can be there in same time' is better expressed as 'who can be there at the same time' to be grammatically correct.

× And actually, uh, it has well, well equipped laboratory, even library with, umm, dedicated teachers and, uh, you know, uh.

✓ And actually, uh, it has a well-equipped laboratory and even a library with, umm, dedicated teachers and, uh, you know, uh.

The phrase 'well, well equipped laboratory' should be 'a well-equipped laboratory' with a hyphen and article 'a'. Also, 'even library' should be 'even a library' to include the article. The preposition 'with' is correctly used here.

× Yeah, I think it's really necessary to like study because it's really important for our educational courses and you can't even be, uh, you know, good person.

✓ Yeah, I think it's really necessary to like studying because it's really important for our educational courses and you can't even be, uh, you know, a good person.

The phrase 'necessary to like study' is awkward; 'necessary to like studying' is more natural. Also, 'good person' should be preceded by the article 'a'.

× I mean, I mean hard worker person, even you don't like study and you have to experience that.

✓ I mean, I mean a hard-working person, even if you don't like studying and you have to experience that.

'Hard worker person' should be 'a hard-working person' with a hyphen and article. 'Don't like study' should be 'don't like studying' to use the gerund form after 'like'. Also, 'even you don't like' should be 'even if you don't like' to be grammatically correct.