School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題，並用連接詞組織句子，使內容更流暢且具體。例如，避免重複和語法錯誤，並用正確的詞彙描述校園設施。

Ejemplo: My school is located in Taipei, the capital of Taiwan. The campus is quite large, consisting of four buildings and a dormitory. It is very convenient because there are many stores nearby.

Sugerencia: 回答中有語法錯誤且內容重複。建議你用更簡潔且正確的句子表達喜歡學校的原因，並用連接詞使句子更連貫。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my school because it is very convenient. Not only are there convenience stores nearby, but also a hospital, which is helpful in emergencies. Additionally, there are many shops where we can buy things.

Sugerencia: 你的回答結構不錯，但有些語法錯誤和重複。建議使用更正式的連接詞，並注意時態一致，使表達更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, of course. My school has a library and a study room on the third floor. These places are quiet and very useful for studying, especially before exams.

Sugerencia: 回答中有語法錯誤和不清楚的表達。建議你用更準確的詞彙描述環境，並用連接詞組織句子，使內容更清晰。

Ejemplo: The environment at my school is very student-friendly. Smoking is not allowed, and there are many trees around the campus. Also, we have several exercise facilities, such as a gym and a rock climbing area.

Sugerencia: 你的回答有好的想法，但語言表達不夠流暢且有重複。建議你用更清晰的句子結構和連接詞來表達觀點，使內容更具說服力。

Ejemplo: I think having interest in studying is very important. When you enjoy what you learn, like playing a game, you can learn faster and focus better. Combining your interests with study helps improve learning efficiency.

× My school is in Taipei, which is the capital of Taiwan and is a really busy place, and my campus is really big, include four buildings and one dump.

✓ My school is in Taipei, which is the capital of Taiwan and is a really busy place, and my campus is really big, including four buildings and one dump.

The verb 'include' should be in the '-ing' form 'including' to correctly connect the clause describing what the campus has. This is a common error where the base form is used instead of the present participle after a comma to add information.

× And I think, uh, around the campus is quite convenient because we have a lot of store around there.

✓ And I think, uh, around the campus is quite convenient because we have a lot of stores around there.

The noun 'store' should be plural 'stores' because it refers to multiple shops around the campus. Using singular here is incorrect when talking about more than one.

× Yes I do, as I mentioned that our school is quite convenient, umm, there are not only just the convenience store but also there was a hospital nearby us.

✓ Yes I do, as I mentioned that our school is quite convenient, umm, there are not only just convenience stores but also there is a hospital nearby us.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'There was' should be 'there is' to match the present tense context. Also, 'the convenience store' should be plural 'convenience stores' to match 'not only just' implying multiple stores.

× If someone have some situation, emergency situation, we could just go directly to the hospital.

✓ If someone has an emergency situation, we could just go directly to the hospital.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'someone'. Also, 'some situation, emergency situation' is awkward; 'an emergency situation' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And also umm there was a lot of shops nearby us and we can buy some.

✓ And also umm there are a lot of shops nearby us and we can buy some.

The verb 'was' should be 'are' to match the present tense context. 'A lot of shops' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are'.

× Yes, of course, 'cause we also have the library and also there was a study room at the third floor.

✓ Yes, of course, 'cause we also have the library and also there is a study room on the third floor.

The verb 'was' should be 'is' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, the preposition 'at' should be 'on' when referring to floors in a building.

× So if you need to study, you can go to those place and have the quiet place to study.

✓ So if you need to study, you can go to those places and have a quiet place to study.

'Those place' should be plural 'those places' to agree with 'those'. Also, 'the quiet place' should be 'a quiet place' because it is not a specific known place.

× Well, for me I would say that it's really friendly for student 'cause you are not allowed to smoke at school and also we have amount of the tree around our campus and also we have a lot of exercise places such as gym or the around the place and also the climb Rob climbing.

✓ Well, for me I would say that it's really friendly for students 'cause you are not allowed to smoke at school and also we have a number of trees around our campus and also we have a lot of exercise places such as the gym or the surrounding area and also rock climbing.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to refer generally. 'Amount of the tree' is incorrect; it should be 'a number of trees' for countable nouns. 'Gym or the around the place' is unclear; 'the gym or the surrounding area' is better. 'Climb Rob climbing' is likely a mishearing of 'rock climbing'.

× Well, for me I would say that it's really friendly for student 'cause you are not allowed to smoke at school and also we have amount of the tree around our campus and also we have a lot of exercise places such as gym or the around the place and also the climb Rob climbing.

✓ Well, for me I would say that it's really friendly for students 'cause you are not allowed to smoke at school and also we have a number of trees around our campus and also we have a lot of exercise places such as the gym or the surrounding area and also rock climbing.

The preposition 'for' is correct with 'friendly for students'. 'At school' is correct for the location of smoking prohibition. 'Around our campus' is correct for location of trees. 'Such as gym or the around the place' is incorrect; it should be 'such as the gym or the surrounding area'. 'Climb Rob climbing' is incorrect and should be 'rock climbing'.

× If someone have some situation, emergency situation, we could just go directly to the hospital.

✓ If someone has an emergency situation, we could just go directly to the hospital.

The preposition 'to' is correctly used with 'go directly to the hospital'. The phrase 'some situation, emergency situation' is awkward; 'an emergency situation' is better.