School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и понятным. Используйте простые и точные предложения, избегайте лишних слов и ошибок. Например, начните с указания местоположения школы, затем добавьте детали о доступности.

Ejemplo: My school is located in the center of a small city called Row Ted. It is easy to get there because it is close to shops, cafes, and homes.

Sugerencia: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и уточните свои мысли, избегая повторений.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my school very much. I have been studying there since the 8th grade. The school is new and has few students, which makes it comfortable, especially for introverted people like me.

Sugerencia: Ответ можно улучшить, сделав его более связным и добавив конкретные детали. Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study. For example, there are many places where we can do our homework after classes, which helps us focus better.

Sugerencia: Ответ должен быть более ясным и логичным. Объясните, что вы имеете в виду под "парламентом" и приведите конкретные примеры, используя связующие слова.

Ejemplo: The environment at my school is good because we have a student parliament that cares about our well-being. For example, yesterday they organized a comfortable and interesting event for us.

Sugerencia: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и избегать повторений. Используйте связующие слова и объясните свои мысли более чётко.

Ejemplo: Interest is very important in studying because it motivates you to learn. Without interest, studying can feel difficult. In fact, having interest in your studies can be like therapy, making learning enjoyable and effective.

× I study in school from one little city for names at row Ted school in the center of the city so that's too easy to move in. Maybe shops or other cafes and home.

✓ I study at a school in a small city called Row Ted School in the center of the city, so it's very easy to get around. There are shops, cafes, and homes nearby.

The prepositions 'in school from' and 'for names at' are incorrect. The correct preposition for attending a school is 'at'. Also, 'from one little city for names at row Ted school' is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity. Use 'in a small city called Row Ted School' to specify location. 'Move in' is incorrect; 'get around' or 'move around' is appropriate for describing ease of movement.

× Yes, of course I have been studying there in 8th grade when these school are open because this school are really new so we don't have a lot of students, but this is so comfortable for other introverts, uh, people who study there.

✓ Yes, of course I have been studying there since 8th grade when this school opened because this school is really new, so we don't have a lot of students, but it is very comfortable for introverted people who study there.

The phrase 'these school are' is incorrect; 'school' is singular, so it should be 'this school is'. Also, 'when these school are open' should be 'when this school opened' to correctly use past tense. 'Other introverts' is unclear; 'introverted people' is more appropriate here.

× Yes, of course I have been studying there in 8th grade when these school are open because this school are really new so we don't have a lot of students, but this is so comfortable for other introverts, uh, people who study there.

✓ Yes, of course I have been studying there since 8th grade when this school opened because this school is really new, so we don't have a lot of students, but it is very comfortable for introverted people who study there.

The phrase 'have been studying there in 8th grade' is incorrect because 'in 8th grade' refers to a specific time in the past. The correct phrase is 'have been studying there since 8th grade' to indicate the starting point of the action continuing to the present.

× Actually, yes, yes I do. I really love my school because we have a lot of places to study after our school works, so after school we can do our homework and study from other places.

✓ Actually, yes, I do. I really love my school because we have many places to study after school work, so after school we can do our homework and study in different places.

The phrase 'after our school works' is incorrect; it should be 'after school work'. Also, 'study from other places' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'study in different places' to indicate location.

× We have a good environment in school because we have a parliament who do everything for our feelings. For example, yesterday we had a Tuesday that's really comfortable and interesting I guess. So there they do everything to feeling good.

✓ We have a good environment at school because we have a student parliament that does everything for our well-being. For example, yesterday we had a special event on Tuesday that was really comfortable and interesting, I guess. They do everything to make us feel good.

'Parliament who do' is incorrect; 'parliament' is singular and should be referred to as 'that does'. 'Everything for our feelings' is vague; 'for our well-being' is clearer. 'We had a Tuesday' is incorrect; it should be 'we had a special event on Tuesday'. 'Do everything to feeling good' is incorrect; it should be 'do everything to make us feel good'.

× Interest is the most important of studying. If you don't have motivation for studying, you don't want studying. That's really bad. When you have a really, uh, interest in school, in study, you had a really big motivation to studying. It's like a part of therapy for you that's really cool and, uh, important.

✓ Interest is the most important part of studying. If you don't have motivation to study, you don't want to study. That's really bad. When you have a strong interest in school and studying, you have a big motivation to study. It's like a form of therapy for you, which is really cool and important.

The phrase 'motivation for studying' should be 'motivation to study'. 'You don't want studying' is incorrect; it should be 'you don't want to study'. 'Interest in school, in study' should be 'interest in school and studying'. 'You had a really big motivation to studying' should be 'you have a big motivation to study' to maintain present tense and correct verb form.