School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer wa shizen de, shōsai mo arimasu ga, 'uh' to iu filler ga haitte iru no de, sore o sakujo shi, motto rikai o fukameru tame ni, kankei no aru jōkyō o motto kuwashiku setsumei shite kudasai. Mata, bunshō ga nagaku nari sugiru koto o sakete kudasai.

Ejemplo: My school was near my house in Osaka, so it took only about 10 minutes to get there by bike. I liked that we didn't have to wear uniforms, which allowed me to dress casually every day. This made me feel more comfortable and relaxed during classes.

Sugerencia: Kotae no naka ni wa imi no fumei na bubun ga arimasu ("my friends and I from the band" no imi ga fumei). Soshite, setsumei ga sukoshi fukami ni kakari sugite, rikai ga muzukashiku natte imasu. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shi, rensetsu-go o tsukatte hanasu koto o kokorogake mashou.

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked my school because I could meet many friends who shared similar interests. For example, my friends and I were in the school band, and we performed at the school festival, which was a very memorable experience. These activities helped me build confidence.

Sugerencia: Kotae wa yoku kangaerarete ori, rensetsu-go mo tsukawarete imasu. Shikashi, motto tokushū na reibun o tsukatte, jiko no kangae o fukameru koto ga dekiru to, motto yoi desu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my school is a great place to study because it offers a quiet environment, unlike my home which has many distractions. Moreover, the teachers are experienced and supportive, helping me understand subjects better. The school also has excellent facilities that enhance learning.

Sugerencia: Kotae no naka ni wa fukuzatsu na bunshō to imi no fumei na bubun ga arimasu ("filled near the side of an old castle" no imi ga wakari nikui). Motto meikaku ni setsumei shi, rensetsu-go o tsukatte hanasu koto o kokorogake shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: My school is very close to the station, making it easy to reach. It is surrounded by a large park with a beautiful pond, creating a pleasant atmosphere for studying. Also, the school is near an old castle, which adds historical charm to the environment.

Sugerencia: Kotae wa rikai shiyasui desu ga, eigo no bunpō to hyōgen ni shōsai na machigai ga arimasu. Motto seikaku na eigo o tsukatte, rikai o fukameru koto o kokorogake shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: Interest in study is very important because it provides motivation and makes learning more enjoyable. When you are interested in a subject, you tend to focus better and spend more time studying. For example, I find it easier to study English when I enjoy the topics I am learning about.

× My school was located near my house in Osaka, so it only took me about, uh, 10 minutes to get there by bike.

✓ My school is located near my house in Osaka, so it only takes me about 10 minutes to get there by bike.

The question 'Where is your school?' asks about the current location, so the present tense should be used. Using past tense 'was located' and 'took' implies the school is no longer there, which is inconsistent with the question.

× One thing I liked about my school was that we didn't have to wear a uniform, which meant I could wear casual clothes every day.

✓ One thing I like about my school is that we don't have to wear a uniform, which means I can wear casual clothes every day.

The question is about the current school, so present tense should be used to describe ongoing facts. Using past tense 'liked', 'was', 'didn't have', and 'meant' suggests the school situation has changed, which is inconsistent.

× Yes, I liked my school because I could meet many friends and we shared similar interests.

✓ Yes, I like my school because I can meet many friends and we share similar interests.

The question 'Do you like your school?' is in present tense, so the answer should also be in present tense to express current feelings and facts.

× For example, my friends and I from the band and we even PR performed at the school festival which was a very memorable experience.

✓ For example, my friends and I are in the band and we even performed PR at the school festival, which was a very memorable experience.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'my friends and I' and has awkward word order with 'PR performed'. Correcting the sentence structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I enjoyed the three these activities because they helped me build confidence.

✓ I enjoyed these three activities because they helped me build confidence.

The phrase 'the three these activities' is redundant and incorrect. The correct quantifier order is 'these three activities' to specify particular activities.

× Yes, I believe my school is a great place to study because it provides a quiet and focused environment which is hard to find at home due to distractions.

✓ Yes, I believe my school is a great place to study because it provides a quiet and focused environment which is hard to find at home due to distractions.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× It is also surrounded by a big park on the beautiful pond, which provides a beautiful atmosphere for studying.

✓ It is also surrounded by a big park and a beautiful pond, which provide a beautiful atmosphere for studying.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here. The school is surrounded by both a park and a pond, so 'and' is appropriate. Also, 'provide' agrees with the plural subject 'park and pond'.

× Interestingly, the school is filled near the side of an old castle which has a historical charm to the environment.

✓ Interestingly, the school is located near the side of an old castle, which adds historical charm to the environment.

The phrase 'is filled near' is incorrect; 'is located near' is appropriate to describe position. Also, 'adds historical charm' is clearer than 'has a historical charm to'.

× Study interest is very important in study because it provide motivation and makes learning more enjoyable.

✓ Interest in study is very important because it provides motivation and makes learning more enjoyable.

The phrase 'Study interest' is awkward; 'Interest in study' is more natural. Also, 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'interest'.

× When you are interested in a subject you tend to focus better on spend more time studying.

✓ When you are interested in a subject, you tend to focus better and spend more time studying.

The phrase 'focus better on spend more time' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'focus better and spend more time' to connect two actions properly.

× For example, I find it easier to study English when I enjoy the topics I am reading learning about.

✓ For example, I find it easier to study English when I enjoy the topics I am reading about or learning about.

The phrase 'reading learning about' is incorrect. It should be 'reading about' or 'learning about' to correctly use the preposition with the verbs.