School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Сократите и исправьте ошибки; используйте более естественные выражения и связки, сделайте ответ короче и яснее. Укажите точное расположение, время в пути и преимущества, используя связующие слова (for example, because, so) и правильную грамматику.

Ejemplo: My school is in the centre of Perm, next to Esplanada Square. It’s very convenient because I can walk from my house in just three minutes, and there are many bus stops nearby, so it’s easy to get there.

Sugerencia: Уменьшите повторения и исправьте грамматические ошибки; дайте структурированный ответ: тема + 1–2 конкретных причины с примерами. Избегайте общих фраз и используйте правильные слова (e.g. helpful teachers, supportive friends).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I like it because the teachers are very helpful and explain difficult topics clearly, and my classmates are supportive, so we often study together and help each other.

Sugerencia: Сделайте ответ более формальным и точным: начните с общего утверждения, затем приведите 2 конкретных примера (например, библиотека, спортзал) и объясните, почему они помогают учёбе. Избегайте разговорных слов и лишних фраз.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe it is a good place to study. For example, the school has a well-stocked library and a good sports hall, which help students relax and concentrate, so it supports both learning and wellbeing.

Sugerencia: Упростите фразы и исправьте словообразование; начните с короткого определения атмосферы и затем приведите конкретные примеры поведения (e.g. cooperative teachers, open discussions). Используйте связки (for example, because) и избегайте повторов.

Ejemplo: The atmosphere at my school is friendly and supportive. For example, teachers encourage questions and students often discuss topics together, so everyone feels comfortable asking for help.

Sugerencia: Дайте более развёрнутый, но короткий ответ: сформулируйте мысль и приведите конкретную причину или пример, объясняющий, как интерес влияет на результаты. Используйте связки (because, for example, therefore).

Ejemplo: Interest is very important because it makes learning enjoyable and helps you stay motivated. For example, when I am interested in a subject, I spend more time studying and usually get better grades.

× My school is located in the center of our city perm near the big square named Esplanada.

✓ My school is located in the center of our city, near the big square called Esplanada.

The original sentence uses an incorrect word 'perm' and awkward preposition use. Use a comma before the phrase and 'called' or 'named' to describe the square. Also 'in the center of our city' is correct; remove 'perm'. Suggestion: place commas to separate location phrases and use 'called Esplanada' for naming.

× In my opinion it is the best location for school because I need to go for my house to school about 3 minutes and there are a lot of bus stops near.

✓ In my opinion, it is the best location for the school because I need to go from my house to school in about 3 minutes, and there are a lot of bus stops nearby.

Use the definite article 'the' before 'school' when referring to a particular institution. Use correct prepositions: 'from my house to school' and 'in about 3 minutes'. 'Nearby' is the correct adverb. Also add commas for clarity.

× Of course, I really like my school because there you can find a lot of friends who will always help you with understanding the material.

✓ Of course, I really like my school because you can find many friends there who will always help you understand the material.

Pronoun placement: 'there you can find' is awkward in English; better 'you can find many friends there'. Use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' before countable 'friends'. Use correct verb structure 'help you understand' not 'help you with understanding'.

× Also we have grateful teacher what always understand the material.

✓ Also we have a helpful teacher who always helps us understand the material.

Use 'a' before singular countable noun 'teacher'. 'Grateful' is wrong; use 'helpful' or 'kind'. Use relative pronoun 'who' for people, not 'what'. Subject-verb agreement: 'teacher...helps', and use 'helps us understand' for correct object pronoun and verb form.

× I reckon that my school is the best place for study because here you can find a lot of areas for chilling, relaxing, doing sport exercises and studying.

✓ I reckon that my school is the best place to study because here you can find many areas for relaxing, exercising and studying.

Use the infinitive 'to study' after 'place'. 'A lot of areas' is awkward; 'many areas' is better. Use parallel gerund forms: 'relaxing, exercising and studying'. 'Doing sport exercises' is unnatural; use 'exercising'.

× For example, we have library, cuisine and other areas so.

✓ For example, we have a library, a cafeteria and other facilities.

Use articles 'a' before singular countable nouns. 'Cuisine' is incorrect for a school cafeteria; use 'cafeteria' or 'canteen'. 'Areas' is vague; 'facilities' is better. Remove trailing 'so'.

× In my opinion, the environment of my school is really friendly and kindness because you can always speak with your friends and teachers on different topics and we will always help you if you don't understand the material.

✓ In my opinion, the environment at my school is really friendly and kind because you can always talk with your friends and teachers about different topics and they will always help you if you don't understand the material.

Use adjectives 'friendly and kind' (not 'kindness' which is a noun). Preposition 'at my school' is more natural. Use 'talk about' not 'speak on'. Maintain consistent subjects: 'they will always help you' instead of 'we will'.

× How important is interest in study?

✓ How important is interest in studying?

Use the gerund 'studying' after 'interest in' to form the correct noun phrase. Alternatively, 'interest in study' could be 'interest in school study' but 'interest in studying' is natural.

× In my opinion, interest is really important in study.

✓ In my opinion, interest is really important for studying.

Use the preposition 'for' with 'studying' to express purpose or area. 'In study' is awkward; 'for studying' or 'in studying' works, but choose 'for studying' to sound natural.

× For instance, if you don't have a motivation for study, you won't achieve any goals.

✓ For instance, if you don't have motivation to study, you won't achieve any goals.

Omit the unnecessary article 'a' before 'motivation' when speaking generally. Use 'motivation to study' (infinitive) rather than 'motivation for study'. The use of 'won't' is correct for future consequence.