School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, use correct grammar and word order, and include a brief location detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one short supporting detail. Avoid repetition and extra articles.

Ejemplo: My school is very close to my home. It’s called Great India Presidency School and is just a five-minute walk from my house.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use natural phrasing. Give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because or since). Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my school because I have many happy memories there. For example, I enjoy spending time with friendly teachers and close friends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion and support it with concrete reasons. Use linking words (because, since, therefore) and avoid unclear comparisons. One or two supporting sentences are enough.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my school is an excellent place to study because the classrooms are quiet and teachers are helpful. Therefore, I often learn better at school than at home.

Sugerencia: Begin with a topic sentence describing the environment, then add specific, well-organized details using linking words (for example, with, and, because). Avoid fillers like 'uh' and use correct grammar and plural forms.

Ejemplo: The environment at my school is peaceful and green. For example, there are many trees, little noise, and plenty of open space for students to relax.

Sugerencia: State your view clearly and explain why with one or two reasons. Use natural expressions such as 'interest in studying' and connect ideas with linking words (because, so, therefore). Avoid vague statements.

Ejemplo: Interest in studying is very important because it helps students stay motivated and learn more effectively. For instance, when I am interested in a subject, I spend more time studying and understand it better.

× My school is nearby my home and my school name is a Great India Presidency School.

✓ My school is near my home and my school's name is Great India Presidency School.

The phrase 'nearby my home' is incorrect; use 'near my home' (preposition use). Also 'my school name is a Great India Presidency School' needs a possessive form ('my school's name') and the article 'a' is unnecessary before a proper school name. Use the proper noun without 'a'.

× Yes I like my school because too much memories I have to my school and all teachers, all friends I remember also.

✓ Yes, I like my school because I have many memories of it, and I remember all the teachers and friends.

'Too much memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is countable and requires 'many' not 'too much'. Word order is also incorrect; use subject-verb-object order ('I have many memories of it'). Use 'of it' or 'from it' rather than 'to my school'. Also 'all teachers, all friends I remember also' should be 'I remember all the teachers and friends.'

× Yes, I think my school is a good place to study, a better home, better than my home.

✓ Yes, I think my school is a good place to study, a better home than my own.

The phrase 'a better home, better than my home' is repetitive. Use comparative form 'a better home than my own.' The definite/possessive clarifies comparison. Also drop the extra 'better'.

× A very good environment my school and very much trees. Uh, no noise, all nature are good.

✓ My school has a very good environment with many trees. There is little noise and the natural surroundings are pleasant.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and nonstandard expressions ('very much trees' should be 'many trees'). Use 'My school has...' to introduce environment. 'All nature are good' is ungrammatical; use 'the natural surroundings are pleasant' or 'the environment is good.'

× Study is a very important and we have interested in study because nothing to do without study.

✓ Study is very important and we are interested in it because there is nothing we can do without studying.

'Study is a very important' is missing a noun after 'important' or should be 'very important' (adjective used predicatively). Use 'interested in it' rather than 'interested in study' for natural phrasing. 'Nothing to do without study' is ungrammatical; express purpose with 'there is nothing we can do without studying.'