Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement), reduce repetition, and give a clearer structure: start with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two supporting details with linking words. Use specific words (learn, borrowed, family members) and avoid colloquial contractions like 'wanna' in formal speech.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to ride. However, whenever I wanted to ride, my father or my cousin would take me with them, and I enjoyed it a lot.

Sugerencia: Clarify your reasoning and correct grammar. Use precise vocabulary (public transport, affordable, ownership) and logical linking words (because, so, therefore). Explain what you mean by 'loan card' or replace with clearer term. Give one specific supporting example or consequence.

Ejemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer public transport or taxis. For example, there are many taxis available and public buses are cheap and convenient, so fewer people choose to buy or ride bicycles.

× No, when I was a child, I never have a bike because I don't know how to ride a bike.

✓ No, when I was a child, I never had a bike because I didn't know how to ride a bike.

The sentence refers to past time ('when I was a child'), so present tense verbs 'have' and 'don't know' are incorrect. Use past simple 'had' and 'didn't know' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: always match verb tense to the time reference in the sentence.

× But always when I wanna, when I want.

✓ But whenever I wanted to,

The phrase 'wanna' is informal and inappropriate; the time reference is past, so use 'wanted' (past simple). Also combine fragments into a single clause: 'But whenever I wanted to,' is grammatically correct and fits the past context. Suggestion: avoid 'wanna' in formal speech and ensure verb tense matches the time reference.

× When I wanna ride a bike, my dad or my cousin take me with them so that I can enjoy it very much.

✓ When I wanted to ride a bike, my dad or my cousin took me with them so that I could enjoy it very much.

Multiple issues: 'wanna' is informal and tense should be past ('wanted'); the verb after the compound subject 'my dad or my cousin' must be singular or agree with nearest? In coordinated subjects joined by 'or' the verb agrees with the nearer subject ('cousin' => took) but because this is past simple use 'took'. Also 'can' should be past 'could' to match past narrative. Suggestion: use past simple consistently and avoid informal contractions.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country? I don't think so because in my country everyone have has a loan card.

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country? I don't think so because in my country everyone has a loan card.

The pronoun/quantifier 'everyone' is singular and requires a singular verb 'has', not 'have'. The original included both 'have has' which is redundant. Suggestion: remember that 'everyone' takes singular verb forms: 'everyone has'.

× However, there are many taxis in my country and the transfer is very easy to them.

✓ However, there are many taxis in my country and getting around is very easy for them.

The phrase 'the transfer is very easy to them' is unidiomatic. If you mean it is easy for people to travel, use 'getting around is very easy' or 'travel is very easy,' and the appropriate preposition is 'for' not 'to.' If you meant taxis are convenient for people, 'for them' is correct. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'getting around is easy' and pair with 'for' to indicate who finds it easy.