Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, verb tenses and sentence clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense consistently when describing childhood, avoid filler words, and keep answers concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences). Add one specific detail to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. I rode it home from school every day and sometimes cycled to the park with my friends. I sold it a few years ago because I moved to the city and now I rarely have time to cycle.

Sugerencia: Organize the response with a clear topic sentence and two supporting reasons using linking words (for example, because / moreover). Correct subject-verb agreement and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "not suitable" instead of "not decided"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and include a brief example or consequence.

Ejemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in Thailand. Firstly, the hot climate makes cycling uncomfortable, and secondly many roads are not suitable or safe for cyclists, which discourages people from using bikes for daily transport.

× Yes, when I was young I have a want bike is a pink bike.

✓ Yes, when I was young I had a bike; it was a pink bike.

The sentence mixes past context ('when I was young') with present tense 'have' and contains ungrammatical phrase 'want bike'. Use past tense 'had' to match time frame and replace 'want' with the correct noun 'a bike' or restructure to 'it was a pink bike'. Also split into two clauses with appropriate punctuation for clarity.

× I usually ride them when umm, I'm finished school or after school.

✓ I usually rode it when I finished school or after school.

The context is past habitual action, so use past simple 'rode' rather than present 'ride'. Also pronoun 'them' refers to plural but 'bike' is singular; change to 'it'. Use past simple 'finished' to match timeframe. Avoid filler 'umm' in formal correction.

× Uh, but now they're not have it anymore because I'm not have time to riot.

✓ But now I don't have it anymore because I don't have time to ride.

Pronoun and auxiliary usage is incorrect: 'they're not have it' is ungrammatical. Use subject 'I' with auxiliary 'do not' plus base verb: 'I don't have'. 'I'm not have time' should be 'I don't have time'. 'riot' is a spelling error; correct verb is 'ride'. Maintain present simple for current state.

× Honestly I think no because Thailand is a hot country so people does not want to ride a bike at the high temperature and also the road is not decided for a bike so if we ride a bike at that road it will be dangerous so that's why.

✓ Honestly, I don't think so because Thailand is a hot country, so people do not want to ride bikes in high temperatures. Also, the roads are not suitable for bikes, so riding there would be dangerous.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: 'I think no' should be 'I don't think so'. Use 'do not' with plural subject 'people' (not 'does not'). 'Ride a bike at the high temperature' is awkward; use 'in high temperatures'. 'The road is not decided for a bike' is incorrect word choice; use 'roads are not suitable for bikes'. Match conditional phrasing with 'would be dangerous' for hypothetical consequence. Also pluralize 'roads' and 'bikes' for natural generalization.