Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Start with a clear, direct topic sentence and use past tense consistently. Keep it concise and natural, up to 2–3 sentences. Add a brief reason or contrast if helpful. Avoid unclear phrasing like "when I was saying."

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked or took the bus to school.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence, use accurate grammar and comparative forms, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Use linking words (because, moreover, for example) and give specific details (who uses them, typical uses, or reasons like cost, convenience). Correct comparative phrasing: "cheaper than other vehicles." Avoid repetition and vague age references—be precise about licensing or common users.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheaper and more convenient than cars. For example, many students and commuters use bicycles to get to school or work, and cities often have bike lanes that make cycling safe. Moreover, bikes are affordable for teenagers and adults, which increases their popularity.

× No, when I was saying I don't have any bike.

✓ No, when I was a child I didn't have a bike.

Errors: 'when I was saying' is incorrect usage; 'saying' is the wrong verb and form (verb + -ing issue and past tense). Also 'I don't have' mixes present with past time reference. 'Any bike' is nonstandard; use 'a bike' for a countable singular. Suggestion: Use simple past to match 'when I was a child' and use the correct noun article: 'I didn't have a bike.' This keeps tense consistent and grammatically correct. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because it is very easy to use and it's very cheaper comparing to other vehicles.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are very easy to use and much cheaper compared with other vehicles.

Errors: 'it is' refers to bikes (plural) so subject-verb agreement error; use 'they are' (third person plural). 'It's very cheaper' is incorrect: 'cheaper' is a comparative adjective and should not combine with 'very'; use 'much cheaper' or 'far cheaper'. 'Comparing to' is incorrect preposition; use 'compared with' or 'compared to'. Suggestion: Ensure subject agrees with verb (bikes → they are), replace 'very cheaper' with 'much cheaper', and use correct comparative preposition. Grammar problem type ID:2

× Also, everyone can use this one from 18 years old person and 16 years old person, they both can use the bike and yeah, it's quite easy and simple that's why.

✓ Also, anyone aged 16 or 18 can use a bike; both age groups are allowed, and it's quite easy and simple to use, which is why.

Errors: 'everyone' with 'this one' is vague; better to say 'anyone aged 16 or 18'. 'From 18 years old person and 16 years old person' is ungrammatical—incorrect pronoun and noun phrase order; use 'anyone aged 16 or 18' or 'people aged 16 and 18'. Pronoun reference: 'they both can use the bike' mixes plural reference awkwardly; clarify 'both age groups are allowed'. Also sentence run-on and cohesion problems: split into clearer clauses and use 'which is why' to link reason. Suggestion: Use clear age phrases 'aged 16 or 18', keep agreement between subject and verb, and break long run-on sentences into shorter, clearer ones. Grammar problem type ID:12