Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, conciseness and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, correct subject-verb agreement, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details with linking words (e.g., “so”, “therefore”, “often”) and keep the answer to 2–4 sentences. For example, say you didn’t own a bike but explain who did, how often you used it, and a brief reason or memory.

Ejemplo: I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but my brother did, so I often used his to get to school. I remember riding it every weekday, which saved time and felt like a small adventure.

Sugerencia: Focus on natural phrasing, correct noun forms and reduce repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., “because”, “for example”, “also”). Use varied vocabulary (efficient, inexpensive, eco-friendly) and avoid repeating the same word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an inexpensive and efficient way to travel in crowded cities. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes to avoid traffic, and riding also provides a good form of exercise, which makes it both practical and healthy.

× I don't have a bike when I was still a child or during my childhood days, but my brother have a bike and I used to use that as well and I use that bike whenever I go to the school.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my brother had a bike and I used to use it when I went to school.

This sentence mixes present tense with past-tense context. Use past tense for actions in childhood: 'didn't have' (negative past), 'was' (past state), 'had' (past possession), 'used to use' (past habitual) and 'went' (past). Also replace 'that as well' with 'it' for clarity and remove the article 'the' before 'school' when speaking generally. Suggestion: keep all verbs in past tense when describing past habits or states.

× ...but my brother have a bike...

✓ ...but my brother had a bike...

The verb 'have' does not agree with a singular subject in past context. In past tense, use 'had' for all persons. If present tense were intended, third-person singular requires 'has'. Here the context is past, so 'had' is correct.

× and I use that bike whenever I go to the school.

✓ and I used that bike whenever I went to school.

This clause refers to past habitual action, so the verbs should be in past tense: 'used' and 'went'. Also use 'school' without 'the' for general attendance. If describing a current habit, keep present tense but context requires past.

× Bike is very popular in my country where I live right now because it's one of the mode of transportation, very efficient, very, very friendly and very environmental friendly at the same time.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country because they are a common mode of transportation, very efficient and environmentally friendly.

Use plural 'Bikes are' when speaking generally. 'One of the mode' is incorrect; use 'a common mode' or 'one of the modes'. 'Environmental friendly' should be the adverbial adjective 'environmentally friendly'. Also avoid repeated 'very'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: plural subject 'Bikes' with 'are' and pronoun 'they'.

× ...because it's one of the mode of transportation...

✓ ...because they are a common mode of transportation...

The phrase 'one of the mode' is ungrammatical. Use 'one of the modes' if keeping 'one of', or better 'a common mode' to mean it's widely used. Also when referring to 'bikes' use plural verbs and pronouns.

× very efficient, very, very friendly and very environmental friendly at the same time.

✓ very efficient and environmentally friendly.

'Environmental friendly' should be 'environmentally friendly' (an adverb modifying 'friendly'). Avoid stacking 'very' multiple times; use one modifier or a stronger adjective. Keep coordinated adjectives parallel.

× Plus you get to have an exercise or you get to be active.

✓ Plus, you get exercise and can be more active.

'Have an exercise' is unnatural; use 'get exercise' or 'have exercise'. 'You get to be active' is wordy; 'can be more active' is clearer. Use parallel structure and concise phrasing.

× Whenever you're using bike, it's a cardio exercise at the same time.

✓ Whenever you use a bike, it is a cardio exercise.

Use 'use' (simple present) for general truths. 'You're using bike' is ungrammatical—need an article: 'you're using a bike'. Better to say 'Whenever you use a bike, it is a cardio exercise.' Also 'at the same time' is redundant and can be omitted.