Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense consistently, reduce repetition, add a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words to show sequence (e.g., "When I was a child, I had a new bike. I used to ride it around our subdivision, but as I grew older I stopped riding it and eventually forgot how."). Pronunciation and fluency: avoid hesitations and repeated words ("to to", "and and").

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I had a new bike. I used to ride it around our subdivision every afternoon, exploring the streets with my friends. However, as I grew older, I stopped cycling and gradually forgot how to ride.

Sugerencia: Improve organization and accuracy: start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific reasons and examples. Use correct grammar (plural forms, articles) and linking words ("for example", "however"). Avoid repetitions and vague phrases. Be more specific about who uses bikes and for what purposes.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in the Philippines. Many people, especially men, use bicycles for recreation, such as mountain biking or city rides. However, they are less commonly used for commuting to school or work because public transport and traffic make cycling difficult in urban areas.

× When I was a child I do have a new bike I used to to roam around a crossing their subdivision back then and and as I grew older I don't know how to to ride a bike anymore.

✓ When I was a child I had a new bike. I used to roam around the crossings in our subdivision back then, but as I grew older I didn't know how to ride a bike anymore.

ID:6: The sentence mixes present tense ('do have', 'don't know') with past-tense context 'When I was a child' and with 'used to' which requires past reference. Use the past simple 'had' instead of 'do have', and 'didn't know' instead of 'don't know' to match the past timeframe. Also remove duplicated words ('to to', 'and and') and correct preposition and possessive: use 'crossings in our subdivision' instead of 'a crossing their subdivision'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent with the time reference, avoid duplicate words, and use appropriate prepositions ('in') and possessive pronouns ('our').

× I used to to roam around a crossing their subdivision back then and and as I grew older I don't know how to to ride a bike anymore.

✓ I used to roam around the crossings in our subdivision back then and, as I grew older, I didn't know how to ride a bike anymore.

ID:8: The phrase contains duplicated infinitive 'to to' and mixes 'used to' (which is followed by the base verb) with incorrect forms. 'Used to' should be followed by the base verb (roam), not an extra 'to'. Also 'to ride' after 'didn't know how' is correct as a base form without doubling 'to'. Suggestion: remove extra 'to' and ensure 'used to' is followed by the base verb; after 'know how' use the base verb.

× I used to to roam around a crossing their subdivision back then

✓ I used to roam around the crossings in our subdivision back then

ID:12: The original uses 'their' incorrectly to refer to the speaker's subdivision. The correct possessive for the speaker is 'our' or 'my'. Also 'a crossing' is awkward; 'the crossings' or 'the streets' is better. Suggestion: choose the correct pronoun that matches the speaker (my/our) and use plural or definite noun when appropriate.

× Bikes are very commonly here in the Philippines specially men are using this and they're using this for the recreations like going on the mountains or like going on across the cities.

✓ Bikes are very common here in the Philippines, especially men use them and they use them for recreation, like going into the mountains or across cities.

ID:2: The sentence uses incorrect verb forms and demonstratives ('are using this') with a plural subject 'men' and plural noun 'bikes'. For third-person plural, use the base verb 'use' not 'uses' — here 'men use them' is correct. Also replace the singular demonstrative 'this' with the plural pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: match verb forms to plural subjects and use appropriate pronouns for plural nouns.

× they're using this for the recreations like going on the mountains or like going on across the cities.

✓ they use them for recreation, like going to the mountains or traveling across cities.

ID:11: Prepositions are incorrect or redundant: say 'going to the mountains' rather than 'going on the mountains', and 'across cities' rather than 'going on across the cities'. Also 'for recreation' is more natural than 'for the recreations'. Suggestion: use 'to' for destinations and 'across' alone for movement across an area; avoid unnecessary articles with uncountable nouns like 'recreation'.

× Bikes are very commonly here in the Philippines specially men are using this and they're using this for the recreations like going on the mountains or like going on across the cities.

✓ Bikes are very common here in the Philippines; especially men use them for recreation, like going to the mountains or traveling across cities.

ID:22: Errors include 'the recreations' (unnecessary definite article and plural) and 'the mountains' and 'the cities' may be acceptable but 'the' can be omitted when speaking generally. Use 'recreation' (uncountable) without 'the'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles when speaking about general activities and use uncountable noun forms when appropriate.

× But you when when it's like going on the school or like going to work, it wasn't that necessary to bring their bikes around.

✓ But when it came to going to school or to work, it wasn't necessary to bring bikes along.

ID:6: The sentence mixes awkward present continuous phrasing ('it's like going') with past tense 'wasn't'. Use a past reference 'when it came to' to match 'wasn't'. Also 'their bikes' is unclear; use 'bikes' or 'one's bike' for general statements. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use clear noun phrases ('bring bikes along').

× But you when when it's like going on the school or like going to work, it wasn't that necessary to bring their bikes around.

✓ But when it came to going to school or to work, it wasn't necessary to bring bikes along.

ID:12: 'Their' is used awkwardly to refer to a general subject; use 'bikes' or 'one's bike' when making general statements. Also remove duplicate 'when'. Suggestion: use generic nouns or 'one's' for generalizations and avoid repeated words.