Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, of course.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Of course, my classmates always ride back with me.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答过于简短,缺少细节和结构。应直接回答后添加一到两句补充说明,比如什么时候有、是谁买的、你如何使用它或记忆中的一次经历。使用连接词(例如“because”或“so”)使表达更连贯。注意不要超过5句。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven because my parents wanted me to learn independence. I used to ride it to the park every weekend and sometimes raced with neighborhood kids, which was great fun.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答回答方向还可以,但表达不够清晰且论据不足。应先给出简明立场,然后用具体理由或例子支持,比如交通习惯、环境因素或城市设施。使用连接词(for example, because, so)让论证更连贯。避免含糊的说法,说明程度(很受欢迎/在某些地区受欢迎)。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and to save money. For example, my classmates often cycle home after school since bicycle lanes are common in our neighborhood.
× Of course, my classmates always ride back with me.
✓ Of course, my classmates always ride back with me.
该句表面看似正确,但根据上下文提问“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?” 学生原句想表达“我的同学总是和我一起骑(自行车)回家/回来”。原句使用主语“my classmates”(复数),谓语“ride”也为原形,与复数主语一致,因此语法上没有第三人称单数错误。故无需改动。建议:如果想更清楚地表达“回家”,可改为 “my classmates always ride home with me” 或 “my classmates and I always ride home together”,但这属于词汇或表达改进,不在指定的错误类型列表中。注意:仅对列表中错误类型进行修改。