Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is short and somewhat unclear because of incorrect word choice and grammar. Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with correct vocabulary and linking words. For example, explain who gave the bike, when you received it, and why it made you happy. Keep responses natural and under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bright red bicycle when I was about seven, and I remember feeling really proud and excited. Because I practiced every day, I soon learned to ride confidently and used the bike to visit friends and explore my neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but is repetitive and contains many hesitations and unclear phrases. Start with a direct opinion, then explain reasons using linking words (for example, because, therefore, especially). Provide specific examples about roads, traffic, or cultural habits to support your view, and keep it concise.

Ejemplo: Not really. In my city bicycles are not very popular because the streets are narrow and traffic is heavy, so riding a bike can be unsafe. For example, in the town centre there are few bike lanes and many motorists, so most people prefer buses or motorcycles instead.

× When I was a child my parents had broke me, a fight for me, so I was very happy.

✓ When I was a child my parents bought me a bike as a gift, so I was very happy.

The student used 'had broke' which is incorrect past tense and past participle of 'break'. Also the sentence structure and word choice are wrong: likely intended meaning is that parents bought a bike or gave a bike. Use simple past 'bought' or 'gave' to match 'When I was a child'. Also 'a fight for me' makes no sense; replace with 'as a gift' or 'for me' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: use regular past verbs and clear noun phrases. Suggested improvement: think of the intended verb (buy/give) and use its correct past tense ('bought'/'gave'), keep simple past consistent with 'When I was a child'.

× No, I don't finish so much because in my city, uh, the road is very narrow, they don't have too much uh, Rd. is suitable for the bike to ride uh, ex, especially in the town centre.

✓ No, not many people finish using bikes here because in my city the roads are very narrow and there are not many roads suitable for riding bikes, especially in the town centre.

Multiple tense and agreement issues and word choice problems. 'I don't finish so much' is ungrammatical—likely meant 'not many people' or 'bikes are not used much'. Use present simple for general facts ('roads are', 'there are not many roads'). 'They don't have too much' is incorrect quantifier usage for countable nouns; use 'not many' or 'there are few'. 'Rd. is suitable' is fragmentary; replace with 'roads suitable for riding bikes'. Also keep subject-verb agreement: 'roads are', 'there are'. Suggestion: express general statements with present simple, use correct quantifiers for countable nouns ('many', 'few') and combine clauses with 'and' or 'because' for clarity.