T-shirt— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and has some grammatical errors. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'I often love wearing T-shirt because of the temperature of the Kathmandu where I am currently living in,' you can say, 'I often wear T-shirts because the weather in Kathmandu, where I live, is quite hot.'

Ejemplo: I often wear T-shirts because the weather in Kathmandu, where I live, is quite hot. Therefore, T-shirts help me stay comfortable while also allowing me to express my fashion sense.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear words and repetition. Make sure to use the correct vocabulary and avoid repeating the same ideas. Also, try to organize your answer with linking words for clarity. For example, instead of 'I bought 2 desserts of different color and different like color as well as a different fashion,' you can say, 'Just yesterday, I bought two T-shirts of different colors and styles.'

Ejemplo: I often buy T-shirts because they are my favorite clothes to wear. For example, just yesterday, I bought two T-shirts of different colors and styles. I enjoy wearing them because they look fashionable and comfortable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has unclear phrases like 'desert' and 'playing T-shirt.' Try to use precise vocabulary and organize your ideas logically with linking words. For example, you can say, 'Older people in my country prefer plain T-shirts because they are comfortable and fashionable.'

Ejemplo: Older people in my country prefer plain T-shirts because they find them comfortable and fashionable. Unlike younger people, they usually avoid T-shirts with prints or writing on them.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear words like 'dishes' instead of 'clothes' or 'T-shirts.' Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, 'I didn't like wearing T-shirts as a kid because the quality and variety were poor, and we lived in the countryside with limited options.'

Ejemplo: I didn't like wearing T-shirts when I was a kid because the quality and variety were limited. Moreover, we lived in the countryside where there were not many options for clothes to choose from.

× I often love wearing T-shirt because of the temperature of the Kathmandu where I am currently living in.

✓ I often love wearing T-shirts because of the temperature of Kathmandu where I am currently living.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when talking generally. Also, 'the Kathmandu' is incorrect; 'Kathmandu' does not need 'the'. The preposition 'in' at the end is unnecessary here.

× It is quite hot here, so wearing T-shirt is a perfect way to sew the fashion as well as to be comfortable in this type of climate.

✓ It is quite hot here, so wearing T-shirts is a perfect way to show fashion as well as to be comfortable in this type of climate.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Also, 'sew' is incorrect; the correct word is 'show'.

× I love buying T-shirt because first of all they are my favorite thing to wear.

✓ I love buying T-shirts because first of all they are my favorite things to wear.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when talking generally. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'they'.

× Just yesterday I remember I bought 2 desserts of different color and different like color as well as a different fashion.

✓ Just yesterday I remember I bought 2 T-shirts of different colors and different styles as well as different fashion.

'Desserts' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirts'. Also, 'color' should be plural 'colors' to match '2'. 'Different like color' is incorrect; 'different styles' or 'different fashion' is better.

× Other people really love wearing T-shirts, mostly because they are fashionable first of all, and they are very comfortable, uh, to wear also.

✓ Other people really love wearing T-shirts, mostly because they are fashionable first of all, and they are very comfortable to wear as well.

No major plural issue here, but 'uh' and 'also' are redundant; 'as well' is more appropriate.

× So, uh, there is a trend that the old people mostly follow is a plain T-shirt.

✓ So, there is a trend that old people mostly follow: plain T-shirts.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when talking generally. 'The old people' can be simplified to 'old people'.

× So rather than just wearing umm, something that is written on the desert, they kind of love playing T-shirt, which is also quite.

✓ So rather than just wearing something that is written on the T-shirt, they kind of love plain T-shirts, which is also quite popular.

'Desert' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirt'. 'Playing T-shirt' is incorrect; it should be 'plain T-shirts'. The sentence was incomplete; added 'popular' for clarity.

× To be honest, I didn't like that much wearing T-shirt when I was a kid because the quality as well as the price the the the range of the color that I get whenever I was kid was not that good.

✓ To be honest, I didn't like wearing T-shirts that much when I was a kid because the quality as well as the price and the range of colors that I got when I was a kid were not that good.

Use past tense 'got' to match 'was a kid'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts'. 'Range of the color' should be 'range of colors'. Subject-verb agreement corrected with 'were' for plural subject.

× And we used to live in the countryside where we didn't have much of the varieties of dishes that I could wear so.

✓ And we used to live in the countryside where we didn't have many varieties of T-shirts that I could wear.

'Much of the varieties' is incorrect; use 'many varieties'. 'Dishes' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirts'. The sentence was incomplete; removed 'so'.