T-shirt— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'except for when I stay home only' 부분은 어색하며, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 복수형과 단수형 사용에 주의하세요.

Ejemplo: I wear T-shirts every day when I go outside, but when I stay at home, I usually wear pajamas.

Sugerencia: 문장이 길고 연결이 부자연스럽습니다. 'because of the clothes are very expensive' 부분은 문법적으로 틀렸으며, 더 자연스러운 연결어 사용과 문장 구조 개선이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: No, I don't buy T-shirts often because they are quite expensive these days. However, if I find a good deal, I buy some clothes.

Sugerencia: 문장이 명확하지 않고 어색합니다. 'In my country and older people' 부분은 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 재구성하여 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 설명을 포함하도록 연습하세요.

Ejemplo: In my country, older people often wear striped T-shirts and shorts, which are quite popular among them.

Sugerencia: 문법 오류가 많고 문장이 불완전합니다. 'my mother and my mother wants to comfortable T-shirts for goods on me so' 부분은 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장 구성을 연습하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a child. I liked wearing only T-shirts, and my mother always wanted me to wear comfortable ones.

× I wear T-shirt every day when I go outside, but except for when I stay home only, I just wear the pajamas.

✓ I wear T-shirts every day when I go outside, but except for when I stay home only, I just wear pajamas.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because it refers to wearing them regularly, implying more than one. Also, 'the pajamas' is incorrect; 'pajamas' is a plural noun and does not need the definite article 'the'.

× No, I don't buy T-shirts often because of the clothes are very expensive at present, so if I have a good chance I just buy some clothes.

✓ No, I don't buy T-shirts often because clothes are very expensive at present, so if I have a good chance, I just buy some clothes.

The phrase 'because of the clothes are' is incorrect; 'because' should be followed by a clause without 'of'. Also, 'the clothes' is unnecessary here; 'clothes' without 'the' is correct when speaking generally. A comma is needed after 'chance' for clarity.

× In my country and older people we can see that they were with striped T-shirts and short pants.

✓ In my country, we can see that older people wear striped T-shirts and short pants.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and structure. 'And older people' is misplaced. The verb tense 'were with' is incorrect; present tense 'wear' fits better. Also, a comma after 'In my country' improves clarity.

× Yes I did when I was a child. I like wearing the T-shirts only and my mother and my mother wants to comfortable T-shirts for goods on me so.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child. I liked wearing T-shirts only, and my mother wanted comfortable T-shirts for me.

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match 'when I was a child'. The phrase 'my mother and my mother wants' is repetitive and 'wants' should be 'wanted' to match past tense. 'Comfortable T-shirts for goods on me so' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable T-shirts for me'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.