T-shirt— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding contradictions and redundancy. For example, you said you wear T-shirts at home because you feel comfortable, but then you said you are not comfortable with it when going out, which is confusing. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I often wear T-shirts at home because they are comfortable. However, when I go to important places like malls, I prefer to wear something more formal because T-shirts seem too casual for those occasions.

Sugerencia: Improve your answer by using clearer sentence structures and linking words. Also, avoid filler words like 'in terms of that' which do not add meaning. Be specific about your buying habits and reasons.

Ejemplo: I don't buy T-shirts very often, maybe about five times a year. This is because I don't wear them to work since they are informal, but I usually wear T-shirts at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has some errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words. Also, avoid hesitation and incomplete words. Be specific about the fashion habits of older people regarding T-shirts.

Ejemplo: In my country, older people rarely wear T-shirts because they find them uncomfortable. Only a few younger seniors might wear them occasionally.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more grammatically correct and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Be specific about the activities and why T-shirts were worn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid, especially at school. We often wore them during activities like dancing because they were comfortable and suitable for movement.

× Well, I often wear T-shirt at home because I feel comfortable and also if I have important matters to attend like going to malls or something like that, I wear T-shirts because I'm not comfortable with it.

✓ Well, I often wear T-shirts at home because I feel comfortable and also if I have important matters to attend like going to malls or something like that, I wear T-shirts because I'm not comfortable with it.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because the sentence refers to wearing them generally and more than one. In English, when talking about things in general, plural form is used without an article.

× In terms of that, not often but maybe 5 * a year because I find that T-shirts will not be wear at work because it's kinda informal thing but I usually wear it at home.

✓ In terms of that, not often but maybe 5 a year because I find that T-shirts will not be worn at work because it's kind of an informal thing but I usually wear them at home.

The phrase 'will not be wear' is incorrect; the correct passive form is 'will not be worn'. Also, 'kinda' should be 'kind of' for formal correctness, and 'it' referring to T-shirts should be 'them' because T-shirts is plural.

× Well I'm I'm not seeing any older people wearing off ***** shirts because I think they are not comfortable with it. So just a few maybe not so old.

✓ Well, I'm not seeing any older people wearing T-shirts because I think they are not comfortable with them. So just a few, maybe not so old.

The phrase 'wearing off ***** shirts' is incorrect; it should be 'wearing T-shirts'. Also, 'comfortable with it' should be 'comfortable with them' because T-shirts is plural. The word 'off' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Yes of course because at school we are usually wear T-shirts because we are having an activity or like dancing it's all wearing T-shirt.

✓ Yes, of course, because at school we usually wear T-shirts when we have activities like dancing; we all wear T-shirts.

The phrase 'we are usually wear' is incorrect; it should be 'we usually wear' because 'usually' indicates habitual action and requires simple present tense. Also, 'it's all wearing T-shirt' is incorrect; it should be 'we all wear T-shirts' to match plural and subject.