T-shirt— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence answering frequency, avoid repetition, use concise supporting details and a linking word to contrast current and past habits. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'the most of my time' → 'most of my time', 'in house' → 'at home').

Ejemplo: I wear T-shirts almost every day at the moment because I spend most of my time at home. However, when I worked at a five-star hotel in Milan, I usually wore shirts with a suit, so my clothing depended on my job.

Sugerencia: Give a concise direct answer, avoid filler and repetition ('I I'), and expand with one specific reason and a linking word. Use a smoother structure without extra commas.

Ejemplo: No, I don't buy T-shirts often. I prefer to keep a small wardrobe because I think buying too many clothes is wasteful, and I focus on buying higher-quality items when needed.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear opinion, avoid hesitations ('uh', 'tough question'), use plural agreement ('older people') and connect ideas with linking words. Provide one specific cultural reason and an example to support your view.

Ejemplo: I think T-shirts are not very fashionable among older people in my country. Older Italians tend to prefer shirts or suits, largely because of the traditional Dolce Vita style which values polished, tailored clothing.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give specific, concise supporting details without repetition ('for several for several years'). Use linking words and correct small grammar ('when I was a kid', 'on me' unnecessary). Limit to about 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts almost every day when I was a kid because I played outdoors and played basketball for several years. T-shirts were the most comfortable and practical option, and I even had a favorite orange T-shirt that I wore a lot.

× At the moment I wear T-shirts every day because I spend the most of my time in house, but when I worked at the Five Star Hotel in Milan I usually wear a shirt with a suit.

✓ At the moment I wear T-shirts every day because I spend most of my time in the house, but when I worked at the Five Star Hotel in Milan I usually wore a shirt with a suit.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly and has article and adverb issues. 'spend the most of my time' is unidiomatic; use 'spend most of my time'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'house'. The second clause refers to past habitual action, so use past tense 'wore' not present 'wear'. Suggestions: use consistent tenses across clauses, include necessary articles, and choose idiomatic expressions.

× No, I I prefer to have a small wardrobe in my house.

✓ No, I prefer to have a small wardrobe in my house.

There is a repeated word 'I I' which is a simple repetition error. Remove the duplicate to make the present simple sentence correct. Suggestion: read aloud to catch duplicated words.

× I think buying too many T-shirts or clothes in general, it's a waste of money.

✓ I think buying too many T-shirts or clothes in general is a waste of money.

This sentence has an unnecessary comma and a duplicate subject 'it' that creates a sentence structure error. Remove the comma and the extra 'it' to form a single clause: 'I think X is a waste of money.' Suggestion: avoid inserting an extra subject when the clause already serves as the subject.

× It's tough question.

✓ It's a tough question.

The indefinite article 'a' is missing before 'tough question.' Add 'a' because 'tough question' is a singular countable noun phrase. Suggestion: use 'a' or 'the' with singular countable nouns as needed.

× I believe that T-shirts aren't uh, really used by older person in my country they prefer to wear a shirt or a suit.

✓ I believe that T-shirts aren't really worn by older people in my country; they prefer to wear a shirt or a suit.

Multiple issues: 'older person' should be plural 'older people' (quantifier/number), and the passive phrase 'used by' is unnatural here—use 'worn by'. Also punctuation is needed between clauses (semicolon or period). Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and prefer 'wear/worn' when talking about clothing.

× Because in Italy there is the Dolce Vita lifestyle.

✓ Because in Italy there is the Dolce Vita lifestyle.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but stylistically beginning a sentence with 'Because' can produce a fragment if not attached to a main clause; here it follows the previous sentence so it's okay. No grammatical correction needed. Suggestion: you could combine with the previous sentence for smoother flow: '...they prefer to wear a shirt or a suit because in Italy there is the Dolce Vita lifestyle.'

× Yes, I used to wear T-shirts every day when I was kid because I spent a lot of time playing outdoors.

✓ Yes, I used to wear T-shirts every day when I was a kid because I spent a lot of time playing outdoors.

The article 'a' is missing before 'kid.' Use 'a kid' for singular countable noun. The rest correctly uses past habitual 'used to' and past tense 'spent.' Suggestion: include appropriate articles with singular countable nouns.

× For example, I played basketball for several for several years, so T-shirts were the most comfortable and practical clothes on me.

✓ For example, I played basketball for several years, so T-shirts were the most comfortable and practical clothes for me.

There is a duplicated phrase 'for several' which is repetitive; remove the duplicate. Also 'clothes on me' is unidiomatic—use 'for me.' Suggestion: avoid duplication and choose correct prepositional phrase 'for me' when indicating suitability.

× And yeah, I had a favorite T-shirt that was orange.

✓ And yeah, I had a favorite T-shirt that was orange.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change required. Suggestion: informal 'And yeah' is acceptable in spoken language.