Number— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar uttor ta besh bistarito kintu kichu redundancy ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shoja, shundor ebong logical vabe link korte. Apni 'used to' er por 'remember' er jaygay 'remembered' use korben, ar 'my all the cousins' er jaygay 'all my cousins' hobe.

Ejemplo: I used to be very good at remembering numbers because I could remember all my cousins' phone numbers. However, nowadays I find it difficult to remember many numbers, perhaps because my memory is not as sharp as before.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar vocabulary error ache. 'number' er plural 'numbers' hobe, ar 'in a current mathematical era' phrase ta natural na. Apni chesta korun uttor ke aro clear ebong natural korte, ebong linking word use korun jate sentence gulo logically connected hoy.

Ejemplo: Yes, in today's world, numbers are essential in almost every job. If I forget any important numbers, I usually write them down on my phone or in my diary, so I can easily check them later.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e grammar ar sentence structure onekta improve kora dorkar. 'I love in doing maths' er jaygay 'I loved doing maths' hobe. 'But however' ek sathe use kora uchit na. Apni chesta korun uttor ke shoja, shundor ebong logical vabe present korte.

Ejemplo: During my childhood, I loved doing maths because I dreamed of becoming an engineer. Although I ended up becoming a doctor, I still have a passion for mathematics in my studies.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar coherence problem ache. 'even it's any kind of motivation or any help' phrase ta clear na. Apni chesta korun uttor ke shoja, logical ebong relevant details diye bistarito korte. Linking words use korun jate uttor ta coherent hoy.

Ejemplo: My mother's phone number is very important to me because I can call her in case of emergencies or when I need advice and support. Also, I have plans to pursue my master's degree in the future.

× I used to be very good at remembering numbers because I can remember the phone numbers of my all the cousins.

✓ I used to be very good at remembering numbers because I could remember the phone numbers of all my cousins.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a past ability. The correct modal verb for past ability is 'could'. Also, 'my all the cousins' is incorrect word order; it should be 'all my cousins'.

× Yes, in a current mathematical era we need to use number in our work.

✓ Yes, in the current mathematical era we need to use numbers in our work.

The article 'a' is incorrect before 'current' because 'current' specifies a particular era, so 'the' is appropriate. Also, 'number' should be plural 'numbers' to match the context of using numbers generally.

× But if I forget anything, I try to write it on my phone or in my diary, so it is easier for me to check the number.

✓ But if I forget anything, I try to write it down on my phone or in my diary, so it is easier for me to check the number.

The phrasal verb 'write down' is the correct form to express recording information. Omitting 'down' changes the meaning and is grammatically incorrect.

× During my childhood I love in doing maths.

✓ During my childhood I loved doing maths.

The verb 'love' should be in the past tense 'loved' to match the past time frame 'during my childhood'. Also, 'love in doing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'loved doing'.

× But however I end up being a doctor but still I have a love for mathematics in my course.

✓ However, I ended up being a doctor, but I still have a love for mathematics in my course.

Using both 'but' and 'however' together is redundant. Also, 'end up' should be in past tense 'ended up' to match the past context. Commas are needed for clarity.

× Yes, in a current mathematical era we need to use number in our work.

✓ Yes, in the current mathematical era we need to use numbers in our work.

The noun 'number' should be plural 'numbers' because it refers to multiple numbers used in work.

× I think my mother's number is really important for me because in case of any emergency I need to call my mom even it's any kind of motivation or any help.

✓ I think my mother's number is really important to me because in case of any emergency I need to call my mom, even if it's for any kind of motivation or help.

The phrase 'important for me' should be 'important to me'. Also, 'even it's any kind of' is incorrect; it should be 'even if it's for any kind of'. Commas improve sentence clarity.